Finger of Fate

Women of wit are treacherous tools,
Ever fatefully embracing idiot fools;
When pleasure waves a finger, it's never too late,
To enjoy the indulgence of the finger of fate.

To tread through briars and hedges of thorn,
Where whimsy's shrewd fickle feet are borne;
And taste with delight the pleasures of pain,
Where everything's lost, and there is no gain.

Whenever a woman of wit should arrive,
Gather your wits to stay alive;
For you know she’ll gather her skirts to chase,
And a fickle finger of fate might just save your face.

For Gwen's Tongue Twister contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Horsman Avatar
December 1, 2012 at 3:37 PM
this is a classic piece of poetry, Elizabeth.. love the philosophy
Dietrich Avatar
November 5, 2012 at 2:59 PM
Hey, I was able to find something to read new by checking your oldies. A very interesting one you have here. Why did you call it a limerick, Lizzy? I would just call it rhyme!
Peranteau Avatar
May 28, 2012 at 7:30 PM
More of a "Tongue twister" than you knows there dear poet ! A Limerick indeed...in spirit(not spiritual) *winkers*....Have a wonderful week Elizabeth....much love, james.....Oh. I don't think my writes are coming out too well these days ! Please don't mention that in the comment of my latest write.....I'll be really clumsy after that. TY
Hall Mad Poet Avatar
July 4, 2011 at 6:18 PM
You are a rare Gem Girlfriend. Many soupees first entry into the soup are love poems you started with my favourite, a limerick and the best yet.
Onclaud Avatar
June 18, 2011 at 10:00 AM
well-done, elizabeth.. i love! … goody cheers for the high win! :) huggs!
Sweetheart Avatar
June 18, 2011 at 5:40 AM
Congrats Elizabeth on your big win in Brian's contest with this rare beauty write.. enjoy with luv..
Mehta Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 6:21 PM
Enjoyed your humor with wit in these fine Limericks, elizabeth
Wesley Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 6:28 PM
Thank you for your kind comment. I've been enjoying yours too. Isn't it a wonderful way to spend some time. I do love writing.
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