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Finger of Fate

Women of wit are treacherous tools, Ever fatefully embracing idiot fools; When pleasure waves a finger, it's never too late, To enjoy the indulgence of the finger of fate. To tread through briars and hedges of thorn, Where whimsy's shrewd fickle feet are borne; And taste with delight the pleasures of pain, Where everything's lost, and there is no gain. Whenever a woman of wit should arrive, Gather your wits to stay alive; For you know she’ll gather her skirts to chase, And a fickle finger of fate might just save your face. For Gwen's Tongue Twister contest

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Date: 12/1/2012 3:37:00 PM
this is a classic piece of poetry, Elizabeth.. love the philosophy
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Date: 11/5/2012 2:59:00 PM
Hey, I was able to find something to read new by checking your oldies. A very interesting one you have here. Why did you call it a limerick, Lizzy? I would just call it rhyme!
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Date: 5/28/2012 7:30:00 PM
More of a "Tongue twister" than you knows there dear poet ! A Limerick indeed...in spirit(not spiritual) *winkers*....Have a wonderful week Elizabeth....much love, james.....Oh. I don't think my writes are coming out too well these days ! Please don't mention that in the comment of my latest write.....I'll be really clumsy after that. TY
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Date: 7/4/2011 6:18:00 PM
You are a rare Gem Girlfriend. Many soupees first entry into the soup are love poems you started with my favourite, a limerick and the best yet.
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Date: 6/18/2011 10:00:00 AM
well-done, elizabeth.. i love! … goody cheers for the high win! :) huggs!
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Date: 6/18/2011 5:40:00 AM
Congrats Elizabeth on your big win in Brian's contest with this rare beauty write.. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 6/6/2011 6:21:00 PM
Enjoyed your humor with wit in these fine Limericks, elizabeth
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Elizabeth Wesley
Date: 6/6/2011 6:28:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comment. I've been enjoying yours too. Isn't it a wonderful way to spend some time. I do love writing.

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