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Who do you think you are? I said it so many times to my old friend too many times until I said it loudly one last time and that was the end I had enough- and banged down the phone outside the birds were singing so sweetly and the wind was blowing like violins as I sat pondering . . . Some may call me meek but I think I am calm I take a lot before blowing up and with this un-friend I took her attitude for years fifteen to be exact . . . I recall the times she was horrible to me (so many) like the time we had a yard sale and she broke a nail what a lot of of shouting and cursing and I made the mistake of laughing out loud (well, honestly it was funny) she turned on me like a wild cat in heat . . . Another time, I helped her to move (gosh she had a lot of stuff) she had booked some movers but they never showed so, I called guys I knew with a truck and we moved her- it took all day . . . I stayed to help her unpack after seeing all the collectibles she was putting out I said- you don't have to put them all out at one time (had heard that on a design show once) well, I thought she was going to go through the roof with the steam coming out her ears so I left . . . hungry and took the bus home . . . I had been working nights, when she asked me to go to a movie- I kept slipping down in my seat and I think I snorted a few times after, she said, how did you like the movie ? and I replied, worst movie I ever saw she left me standing in the parking lot bewildered I walked home through the dark park under the twinkling stars . . . then, there was the classical concert where I truly did fall asleep . . . oops But, there were lots of times leading up to the last day where I would break the silence and call (we would never, ever mention the incident) But, this particular day I had gone out with lady in my building for cafe SHE- had called and called and left messages I really had intended to call back but forgot . . . Well, she called me again, hello I said, so sweetly I had to hold the phone away from my ear for the cursing and shouting that was happening where to "H" were you she roared ! I listened (calmly) grinding my teeth then- said loudly, fine, whatever and WHO DO YOU THINK YOU ARE? slamming the phone that was the end . . . of our un-friendship it felt good to be free of her negativity . . . Yet, there was a sadness too! for there were some great times along the way but the price to my dignity was just too high . . . in the end ___________________________ August 26, 2018 Poetry/Narrative/Fine, whatever Copyright Protected, ID 18-1054-960-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Who Do You Think You Are sponsor, Caren Krutsinger Second Place

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Date: 9/28/2018 9:10:00 PM
NOBODY needs that kind of friend !!! Good riddance. Well penned poem. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/30/2018 6:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Well done.
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Date: 8/29/2018 9:15:00 AM
Congrats on your win Constance. It is always sad when a friendship comes to an end.
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Date: 8/28/2018 5:03:00 PM
Gershon thanks for the congrats and for the comment, the problem was that it was always me who broke the silence, always me.... me who had to suck it up ~
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Date: 8/28/2018 4:45:00 PM
Hey, we're only human once in a while. Betcha she screamed, "Who does she think she is!" after she hung up... Of course, she was left talking to herself, ironically. Maybe you helped her get it! (Then again, probably not)… Intriguing words. Congrats on your win in the contest! ~ Gershon
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Date: 8/28/2018 7:22:00 AM
Teppo thanks for the congratulations!
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Date: 8/27/2018 6:30:00 PM
Thank you Silent, Sun, Victor, Maureen, and Jan for the visit to my poem and for commenting, so appreciated !
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Date: 8/27/2018 1:18:00 PM
She doesn't sound much of a friend to behave like that:-( congrats on your win Constance:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/27/2018 12:50:00 PM
Well done! Congratulations for putting yourself first and for your win :) xomo!
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Date: 8/26/2018 4:45:00 PM
Betcha this hits home to many people. What we do put up with to keep from losing a "friend."
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Date: 8/26/2018 10:45:00 AM
That is a good start to your poem BW...
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