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Who do you think you are?
I said it so many times to my old friend
too many times
until I said it loudly one last time
and that was the end
I had enough-   and banged down the phone
outside the birds were singing so sweetly
and the wind was blowing like violins
as I sat pondering . . .

Some may call me meek but I think I am calm
I take a lot before blowing up
and with this un-friend I took her attitude for years
fifteen to be exact . . . 

I recall the times she was horrible to me (so many)
like the time we had a yard sale
and she broke a nail
what a lot of of shouting and cursing
and I made the mistake of laughing out loud
(well, honestly it was funny)
she turned on me like a wild cat in heat . . .

Another time, I helped her to move
(gosh she had a lot of stuff)
she had booked some movers but they never showed
so, I called guys I knew with a truck
and we moved her-   it took all day . . .
 
I stayed to help her unpack
after seeing all the collectibles she was putting out
I said-  you don't have to put them all out at one time
(had heard that on a design show once)
well, I thought she was going to go through the roof
with the steam coming out her ears 
so I left . . .  hungry and took the bus home . . . 

I had been working nights, when she asked me 
to go to a movie-  I kept slipping down in my seat
and I think I snorted a few times
after, she said, how did you like the movie ?
and I replied, worst movie I ever saw
she left me standing in the parking lot bewildered
I walked home through the dark park 
under the twinkling stars . . .
then, there was the classical concert where I truly 
did fall asleep . . . oops 

But, there were lots of times
leading up to the last day where I would break the silence
and call (we would never, ever mention the incident)

But, this particular day
I had gone out with lady in my building for cafe
SHE- had called and called and left messages
I really had intended to call back 
but forgot . . . 

Well, she called me again, hello I said, so sweetly
I had to hold the phone away from my ear
for the cursing and shouting that was happening
where to "H" were you she roared !
I listened (calmly) grinding my teeth 
then-   said loudly, fine, whatever and
WHO DO YOU THINK YOU ARE? slamming the phone
that was the end . . .  of our un-friendship
it felt good to be free of her negativity . . .  

Yet, there was a sadness too!
for there were some great times along the way
but the price to my dignity
was just too high . . .  in the end
___________________________
August 26, 2018


Poetry/Narrative/Fine, whatever
Copyright Protected, ID 18-1054-960-01
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.


Written for the contest, Who Do You Think You Are
sponsor, Caren Krutsinger

Second Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 9/28/2018 9:10:00 PM
NOBODY needs that kind of friend !!! Good riddance. Well penned poem. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/30/2018 6:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Well done.
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Date: 8/29/2018 9:15:00 AM
Congrats on your win Constance. It is always sad when a friendship comes to an end.
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Date: 8/28/2018 5:03:00 PM
Gershon thanks for the congrats and for the comment, the problem was that it was always me who broke the silence, always me.... me who had to suck it up ~
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Date: 8/28/2018 4:45:00 PM
Hey, we're only human once in a while. Betcha she screamed, "Who does she think she is!" after she hung up... Of course, she was left talking to herself, ironically. Maybe you helped her get it! (Then again, probably not)… Intriguing words. Congrats on your win in the contest! ~ Gershon
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Date: 8/28/2018 7:22:00 AM
Teppo thanks for the congratulations!
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Date: 8/27/2018 6:30:00 PM
Thank you Silent, Sun, Victor, Maureen, and Jan for the visit to my poem and for commenting, so appreciated !
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Date: 8/27/2018 1:18:00 PM
She doesn't sound much of a friend to behave like that:-( congrats on your win Constance:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/27/2018 12:50:00 PM
Well done! Congratulations for putting yourself first and for your win :) xomo!
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Date: 8/26/2018 4:45:00 PM
Betcha this hits home to many people. What we do put up with to keep from losing a "friend."
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Date: 8/26/2018 10:45:00 AM
That is a good start to your poem BW...
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