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Fine Red Wine

Eager red grapes on the vine just waiting
Color so deep, sugar sweet time has past
Voices in the fields, breathe for the baiting
Harvest soon, autumn smiles may not last

Passionate nectar in the juices' drop
Garner gold in the fingers of famine
Oh dear dream you have made this season stop
This pleasure of flavor is no mammon

Red flows innocent under pretty feet
Peeling the patience from a thirsty man
Pining for that draught to quicken his beat
But he must hold, theft is no righteous stand

Fine red wine your favor is in the cask
I will wait; I will wait for you to ask
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Buckling Avatar
February 16, 2010 at 4:52 AM
Thank you all for your kind comments.
Dietrich Avatar
February 15, 2010 at 2:00 PM
Wow, beau, I do believe this is the only "winning" one true to the actual English sonnet form in all regards. Glad you made the winner's list. Andrea
Brown Avatar
February 15, 2010 at 5:34 AM
Congratulations on your win in Laura's contest Beau. Love, Carol
Dufresne Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 2:12 PM
This is a real smiler, Beau. very well expressed. A fine job with this write! i enjoyed it. congratulations!-Robert
Sweetheart Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 11:25 AM
Congrats Beau on your winning poem in Laura's contest.. an amazing write and a wonderful win.. enjoy your victory and moment in the spotlight for this delight...luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
Muzzey Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 9:37 AM
Congratulations on your win with a very nice sonnet. Caryl
Fraser Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 8:04 AM
Many congratulations Beau, on your win in Larua's fine contest >> James
Devonshire Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 7:32 AM
Don't wait too long, Beau. Seize the moment! Congratulations on your success in Laura's contest! Nice work. Love, Carolyn
Shango Avatar
December 21, 2009 at 10:15 AM
Garner gold in the fingers of famine ... one of he great imageries of English poetry. Bravo!
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