Fine Fooling Myself

Do not go gentle into that good night but rage,
rage against the dying of the light
—Dylan Thomas


sunny outside, not
cloudy inside; out
of my mind, mindless
wandering and wondering;

fine - fooling myself?
days tedious, no drums.
no inkling of a violin,
even to suffer with.
May be smoking hot,
but red skin is turning white.

falling up, failing to feel sorry
for oneself. calls limited
to a free for all. Fall
can’t come soon enough
with its brisk breeze,
booming colors, activities.

still, I will rest. I rest
in the curve
of the Almighty’s arm.
the arrow is set
in the string of the bow.
my smile longs
to jettison on the wind.

a windy day, to feel
the joy of friendship,
to fill my quiver
with euphoria.

still, we all must give up
a bit of ourselves,
not to be too full
of ourselves.
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Cunningham  Avatar
August 23, 2025 at 2:05 PM
My smile longs to jettison on the wind. A windy day, to feel the joy of friendship To feel my quiver, with euphoria.. Wow. Enjoyed reading what read to be real; Somehow, somewhere... To someone.
Rigoler Avatar
July 18, 2025 at 3:50 AM
I can relate to this write, Kim! Your metaphors are very apt, especially the fourth stanza! I envy your gift. / Maurice
Rodrigues Avatar
July 18, 2025 at 4:59 AM
I appreciate you, Maurice! Thank you! Glad you liked that verse.
Baker Avatar
July 17, 2025 at 9:57 PM
"still, we all must give up a bit of ourselves, not to be too full of ourselves." Powerful words of wisdom, Kim. I like your poetry. Bill
Rodrigues Avatar
July 18, 2025 at 4:59 AM
Thank you so much, Bill!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 17, 2025 at 5:14 PM
wow! Your poem spoke to me on many levels. Such skill you have! I especially liked the last two verses. I'm awed for sure!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 17, 2025 at 6:08 PM
Thank you kindly, dear Sara
Hind Avatar
July 17, 2025 at 11:50 AM
"no inkling of a violin, even to suffer with." that's a beautiful metaphor, dear Kim, I am left the impression that you have gained a sort of wisdom and serenity <3 "the arrow is set in the string of the bow"
Rodrigues Avatar
July 17, 2025 at 1:41 PM
Thank you, Paige! I appreciate your thoughts! Hugs
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