Fine Art - Hiku

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Japanese lacquer hair comb with kanzashi hair accessories : The Spanish Comb | Ruby Lane

*Image of A Japanese Comb Set by Pixabay. *When left at one's front door symbolizes 'parting' or 'goodbye' fine art 1 - hiku art writes to you art is a written form~~ read between the lines fine art 2 - hiku art speaks to you art is a spoken form~~ lost in translation 2022 February 12 *1st Place* A Strand (1072) ~~Brian Strand: Judged 2022 February 13

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Bill Baker

Date: 2/12/2022 11:37:00 PM

Depth in this Haiku, Hilo. I like the lovely images you chose to accompany your poem. Have a great day! Bill

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/13/2022 12:36:00 AM

Thanks again, Bill, as your expressions grow appreciably my friend, Aloha~William!

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/12/2022 5:18:00 PM

Great Hiku's William. A piece of art is a way of permanently committing sentiments and thoughts to a substance. Why bother committing to something if it is not designed to last if it is not deeply rooted in one's heart and mind?

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/12/2022 7:17:00 PM

The pith of it, a rare few will understand the artisan's intent, a rarer few will understand the artisans themselves ... then there is the rarest breed of all. Those who are capable to be the artisan, naught via assimilation but by a collection of values and strengths of that that possesses, my friend. Aloha~William!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/12/2022 3:28:00 AM

I like these which explain some symbols in another culture. The comb set is very beautiful but would be the bearer of sad news. Your visit to my page was uplifting. Sara

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/12/2022 9:56:00 AM

You are certainly deserving, Sara and your added input exposing the featured image and subsequent message is as you've indicated bearing an underlying conveyance, whereto, the giver's gesture shows their incapable to perform the simple act of saying goodbye, having found it too arduous to tax their souls my friend, Aloha~William!