Finding the light

Light is extant in the darkness deep in my mind, 

Searching for its path which I just can’t find. 

Twisting, twirling, contorted, without form, 

Leaving me stranded in my own storm,

Torn asunder, as I surrender to esoteric dreams, 

Still, when I’m awake I know not what one means. 

White Wolf
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Crandall Avatar
June 3, 2025 at 7:03 PM
Interesting experience. I tried to figure things out, but then I gave up.
Wolf Avatar
June 6, 2025 at 3:33 AM
lol
Thomas Avatar
February 27, 2025 at 10:39 AM
...it's almost if you wrote my mind. Just wanted to visit a friendly page. Just returned and frustrated with drama here... Thank you for being here Rick
Wolf Avatar
June 6, 2025 at 3:35 AM
great to see you again. i have a computer now lol
Vaso Avatar
October 2, 2024 at 12:18 AM
Brilliant poetry as usual!!!!
Wolf Avatar
June 6, 2025 at 3:35 AM
thank you, arthur
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