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Finding Nirvana

She had never seen the bottom of a lake before. This was surely a magical place, she felt all powerful. Not a bit of fog or murk was in the water. She could see to the bottom. It was an eerie feeling. This is surely God’s country she told herself. Feeling selfish that she alone was observing it. Did this happen for everyone who found this reverent place? She wondered at the mysticism she felt. There was something supernatural about it. She felt surrounded by God’s grace. She stopped rowing and floated, soaking up His rays. loving His gift of this holy place. Nirvana.

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Date: 3/5/2022 8:50:00 AM
Brought to mind the warm, clear waters of the Caribbean. I love to float where you can see clear to the bottom. Nirvana, for sure.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/5/2022 9:13:00 AM
For sure!
Date: 3/5/2022 5:47:00 AM
Take us with you!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/5/2022 9:13:00 AM
I thought I had when I wrote this

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