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Finding Gold

gold - like firework's light splashes coastal cliffs just right. . . natural delight!

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Skat A

Date: 5/16/2015 11:14:00 AM

WOw, so this is what your old haiku looks like. Interesting title. SKAT

Kash Poet

Date: 2/6/2011 1:30:00 PM

Another beautiful Haiku from you Andrea---kash

Juan Paolo Galua

Date: 4/28/2010 6:48:00 PM

oh indeed...I always love gold as i also love this poem..great...^_^ v

Phil Boy

Date: 4/27/2010 9:58:00 AM

Give me some lady/thanks for the comment. You are to sweet,(Baby boy)

Lynette Chachere

Date: 4/23/2010 10:45:00 PM

natural delight, you make gold sound so yummy.but yet it always has been, i want to swin in these pure waves.by the way, I'm sorry i couldn't read your poems earlier, i went to chuckie cheese with Erin, my lil sis, my mom and boyfriend.gold is a noble one, just like those eyes of yours, Andrea. -Always&Forever Lynette

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/23/2010 6:42:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Guiding Light contest Andrea. Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 4/22/2010 6:29:00 PM

Congratulations Andrea on your fine poem's success in Raul's contest. Agape, Moses

Kim M

Date: 4/22/2010 2:29:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. The rhyme in this haiku made it cheerful, fun to read.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/22/2010 2:08:00 PM

Andrea, Tim got cut last night. I hated to see him go. We'll miss his sweet nature and bright smile. I really liked his personality and thought he did a great job with the "Hallelujah" song as well as the Beatle song. Aaron was in the bottom three, but he wasn't eliminated. There's a special place in my heart for this kid who grew up without parents. He seems very grateful to the couple who adopted him. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/22/2010 2:08:00 PM

Congrats Andrea on your winning poem in Raul's contest (12th) with your perfect words for the photo.. enjoy my friend.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Farah Chamma

Date: 4/22/2010 2:02:00 PM

A great Haiku. I love the first line. Good luck in the contest.. Always, Farah

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/22/2010 12:55:00 PM

Andrea, congratulations on your success in my contest...Raul

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/22/2010 12:53:00 PM

Congratulations, Andrea...on your placement in the Guiding light contest!! I hope to find a little gold too....(perhaps the real kind??!! lol)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/22/2010 11:59:00 AM

Wishing you the best in Raul's contest Andrea. Love, Carol

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 4/22/2010 9:43:00 AM

very nice good luck in the contest and thank you so much for your kind comments and for all of your support it is greatly appreciated faleshia

Katherine Stella

Date: 4/22/2010 7:58:00 AM

oh I like this one too gl in contest alot of great entrys for this one for sure keep up the wonderful writing blessings

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 4/22/2010 12:29:00 AM

Life's worth is indeed within the nature that surrounds us and yet so often overlooked at higher costs to ourselves! £, $, whatever have little value when compared to what we can take in for free, a pity it would be difficult for us all to survive if relied on nature alone though! Your Haiku today brought with it much muse through the wonderful picture painted, well done! Thanks for yur welcome comment and sorry it took so long to get back, (I've have health issues...) Anna-Marie.

Margaret Foster

Date: 4/21/2010 11:41:00 PM

It does look like a golden fountain firework. good luck with this charming verse....Margaret

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/21/2010 10:57:00 PM

A fine haiku. All the best in the contest

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 4/21/2010 8:59:00 PM

Delightful Haiku, Andrea! Good luck on the contest. Thanks for your kind comments on my poem today. Best wishes, Caroline.

Matthew Anish

Date: 4/21/2010 7:40:00 PM

Brillant images in this poem! I have sold articles to a couple of postcard magazines. I work as a writing assitant at BMCC in Manhattan. It is not always easy to deal with professors. They think they know all there is to know about literature - and sometimes politics. What do you think about the volcanic eruption in Iceland? Pretty sad isn't it. I published an anti war poem in Soul Fountain magazine. If you happen to see it let me know what you think Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/21/2010 7:10:00 PM

I admire the fundraising efforts, but Idol seems to be dragging on and on tonight. I like all of the contestants in the bottom three, but of course we have few left so the choices get harder each week. I do believe Crystal will win and Lee will come in second. You know I like "Goldilocks" and I'll miss him if he's sent packing. Love, Carolyn

Kim M

Date: 4/21/2010 5:17:00 PM

This is a beautiful scene as described by you.

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/21/2010 5:16:00 PM

Andrea, thanks for supporting my contest...Raul

Skat A

Date: 4/21/2010 5:10:00 PM

I need to write me a new poem. I am getting left behind. I love the picture you have on this one looks like a day in July. Good luck in the contest.