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Finding God

Finding God Vast universe, vivid mortal life filling the pod, Do you think it would be easy finding God? Experience tranquility and feel him in nature, As blue sky sees the morning sun feature, Twilight of dawn and chirp of sparrows, Silent beauty of dusk as sun descends yet glows, Changing hues of sky reflected in deep seas, Colourful flowers and aroma of breeze, He is in all emotions and in every vein, Finding God is not like passing a tough terrain, His mystique enchants anywhere you go, His blessings illuminate as a radiant halo, You will find him in every sympathetic heart, Be it a tender smile, or most arduous start, In temples, churches have you seen Him reside? Why not for once peep into your very inside? Written on 9/8/14 Contest- Finding God Sponsor- Gail Angel Doyle

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Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 8/18/2014 7:10:00 AM

An inspiring write where the varied colors and Nature are splashing in every stanza of this beautiful write dear friend with all its vivid beauty and the inspiration which you have given in the last stanza of beautiful write. In temples, churches have you seen Him reside?, Why not for once peep into your very inside?' Thanks for such a beautiful read. It goes in my favorite Poems & thank you once again for your very kind words on the Love Story Poem series. Love and best wishes.Ravindra K Kapoor

Estela Canama

Date: 8/17/2014 11:55:00 AM

This is an inspiring piece. God is always with us... Congrats! God bless.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 8/17/2014 12:43:00 AM

Congratulations and I enjoyed reading your poem. God bless you and happy writing. Love and Prayers. Gina

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/16/2014 10:11:00 AM

Grats on your wonderful poem being a winner, well done :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/15/2014 11:51:00 AM

He is everywhere and your graceful piece mirrors this, dr.upma.. sweet congrats and huggs

Faye Gibson

Date: 8/14/2014 8:38:00 PM

Congratulations on a fine win!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 8/13/2014 8:14:00 AM

Love your last line Dr. Very challenging, intriguing and thought provoking... :) the first two stanzas love the painting

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/13/2014 1:22:00 AM

Congrats on this fine write " Finding God", Dr.Upma

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/12/2014 9:19:00 PM

"You will find him in every sympathetic heart, Be it a tender smile, or most arduous start, In temples, churches have you seen Him reside? Why not for once peep into your very inside?" So very true! Congrats on your win my friend!!

John Lawless

Date: 8/12/2014 6:27:00 PM

Hey, Dr. Upma, the last line says it all. When I returned from my "search for God" my mentor asked me "did you find Him". I said: "no", he replied:"probably because you didn't take him with you.".

Abdul Malik

Date: 8/12/2014 3:30:00 PM

My congrats. Nicely done.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/12/2014 12:19:00 PM

- Congratulation on your winning poem in: "Finding God" - Contest - Sponsored by: Gail Angel Doyle - Skillfully rhyme and beautifully written, Dr. Upma :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)