Finding God

The world, devoid of hope, ripe with aches of every kind.
All the afflictions for a growing child; body, soul, and mind.
Rich in anger, derived from pain.
Not knowing of a soul-cleansing rain.

Where, O God, in my greatest time of need,
Were you that you could not spare me?
How, O God, and for what misdeed,
Was I to be punished so harshly? 

Whilst in my room, wherein light had died,
Lay I, to bleed; to writhe, teary-eyed.
In this dungeon of mine, in its deepest recesses,
I was found and was taken into divine caresses.

I found that for which I had not sought
And was given a hope I had long since forgot.
In all the trials and tortures of life, this one thing is true:
My God, despite my abandonment, I was found by You.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Davis Avatar
August 18, 2014 at 7:21 AM
Love this poem <3
Nance Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 10:17 AM
Grats on your wonderful win;)
Onclaud Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 11:53 AM
very inspiring, jonathan.. sweet congrats and huggs
Gibson Avatar
August 14, 2014 at 8:40 PM
Very good!! Congratulations on a fine win.
Sietesantos Avatar
August 13, 2014 at 5:32 PM
Bravo!
A. Sharma Avatar
August 13, 2014 at 7:18 AM
Great write Jonathan, yes He adores u even if u ignore Him, congrats on big win!
Mehta Avatar
August 13, 2014 at 1:23 AM
A brilliant write on Finding God, Jonatha. Congrats
Lindley Avatar
August 12, 2014 at 9:20 PM
Big congrats on your win!!!
Andresen Avatar
August 12, 2014 at 12:18 PM
- Congratulation on your winning poem in: "Finding God" - Contest - Sponsored by: Gail Angel Doyle - Skillfully rhyme and beautifully written, Jonathan - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
August 12, 2014 at 11:44 AM
Many congratulations for you win in the contest:-) Hugs jan x
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