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I've sought all concept for mitigating puzzles. I poured my heart and soul into getting rid of muddles. We were entwined in the tangled bushes. When you've gone, nothing to speak about. And there is no silver lining, but there is a gray doubt. I was not enticed by the last beats of the falling drums. Written June 15, 2021 All Yours (Jun 19) Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Alexis Y.

Date: 6/16/2021 7:03:00 PM

WoW! Lasaad, What a deep and thought-provoking write. Best wishes in the contest. Have a good evening my friend:-)Alexis

Ken Rone

Date: 6/16/2021 8:23:00 AM

Hello Lasaad - I am hoping for another win for you in the contest...worthy competition for sure but this poem is wonderful - Ken

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/15/2021 10:16:00 PM

Deep poem in such a few lines.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/15/2021 4:03:00 PM

So much mystery in life Lasaad, something take longer to untangle then others. Nicely written gl

Sotto Poet
Date: 6/15/2021 5:02:00 PM

Indeed dear friend, life itself is a mystery, but we won't get tangled in riddles when we are on the straight path. Thanks for the kind, supportive words. Blessings and best wishes

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/15/2021 3:28:00 PM

Thought provoking verse Lasaad, you packed a lot into a few lines. Best of luck Tom

Sotto Poet
Date: 6/15/2021 5:04:00 PM

Thanks for the kind, supportive words, Tom, Indeed, life is a mystery, but we won't get tangled in riddles when we are on the straight path. Blessings and best regards

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/15/2021 3:01:00 PM

A very fine, intriguing write, Lasaad--your thoughts made me pause and think. All the best.

Sotto Poet
Date: 6/15/2021 5:08:00 PM

So true, Vijay; there are philosophical trends behind it, as life itself is a mystery. Thanks for your wonderful comment. Blessings and best regards.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 6/15/2021 2:51:00 PM

A riddle can feel like being caught in tangled bushes, this is so layered and mysterious!

Sotto Poet
Date: 6/15/2021 5:09:00 PM

Absolutely Michelle, but we won't get tangled in riddles when we are on the straight path. Thanks for the kind, supportive words. Blessings and best wishes

L Milton Hankins

Date: 6/15/2021 1:45:00 PM

Very intriguing lines, Lasaad. Thought-provoking.

Sotto Poet
Date: 6/15/2021 5:11:00 PM

Indeed dear Milton, thinking about our life is a hard dilemma to solve, but we won't get tangled in riddles when we are on the straight path. Thanks for the kind, supportive words. Blessings and best regards