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Find Me Then

Find me then, in the garden of souls Where silence opens her golden wings And whispers sorrow to the cold wind While shadows slither among the stones Find me then, when winter winds have ceased And daffodils bloom in golden glow How they dance to springtime's song anew, When gardens bloom again, find me then ~ 6-10-2020 Repeat The Phrase Poetry Contest Sponsor: Nette Onclaud

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Funom Makama

Date: 6/15/2020 3:50:00 PM

Remarkable lines, true words, amazing piece from a very deep and wise mind. I love every bit of this. Great work Joseph May and a big congratulations on your win.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/15/2020 11:04:00 AM

A win my friend, congratulations - deservedly so - When gardens bloom again, find me then! Creative and simply awesome. Blessings, Jennifer.

Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/13/2020 7:23:00 PM

Back to congratulate you on your win Joseph :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/13/2020 7:12:00 PM

So gorgeous, Joseph. I think that was the easiest of the themes to do as well. I just loved that theme. Congrats. You did it amazingly well.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/13/2020 2:12:00 PM

Great poem, super win. BIG congrats, Joseph.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/13/2020 12:58:00 PM

just marvelously penned, joseph... now find yourself winning high in my contest--congrats!... huggs

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 6/13/2020 1:24:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this lovely verse. Thank you, Joseph, Good luck in the contest...

Supraja Kannan

Date: 6/13/2020 1:08:00 AM

Beautifully penned... Enjoyed it...

Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/12/2020 8:55:00 PM

"Find me then" I like this. There is something beautiful, yet eerie about your entire poem. I am drawn to each and every moment. I wish to place this in my favorites. ~ Brandy

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/12/2020 1:42:00 PM

Absolutely beautiful, Joseph! Janice

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/12/2020 12:51:00 AM

Silence opens her golden wings - such a lovely line, Joseph, beautiful little poem:)

Arturo Michael

Date: 6/11/2020 9:18:00 AM

Lovely poetry...Find me here...

Joseph May
Date: 6/11/2020 10:24:00 AM

Thank you Arturo..

Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/11/2020 8:49:00 AM

Silence opens her golden wings in the garden of souls...what a beautiful imagination Joseph. This is a pleasing read for me. Best wishes for the contest. God bless you :)

Joseph May
Date: 6/11/2020 10:23:00 AM

Thank you Aditi

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 6/10/2020 10:21:00 PM

Beautiful imagery laced in sorrow, Joseph. I love every line...a fave! Cemeteries can be beautiful, peaceful places of reflection. Best of luck in the contest. Blessings, Rhonda xx

Joseph May
Date: 6/11/2020 5:49:00 AM

Thank you so much Rhonda, and thanks for making t a fave..