Finality

Sweet smell of earth freshly
turned over in which I lie
below in damp darkness.

Eyes, once needful, eternally
asleep. The Holly tree that
 thrived throughout


the years grows green
and strong; I have no 
need of it. (nor do I

remember it) in the place
where I have gone.
The silentness of

voiceless nights, I 
cannot comprehend.
nor a Robin's tune

in leafy tree; or
the song sung by a
warm and gentle breeze.

Plant lillies on my mound
if you choose. It matters
not to me. I remain alone,

no one to hold or comfort me.
winter, spring, summer, fall-
 now all the same to me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Kiser Avatar
May 7, 2019 at 8:48 AM
A powerful write!
Agustin Avatar
May 7, 2019 at 6:29 AM
Thanks for the letting me reflect about the essence of finality. It's my prayer that your "I remain alone, no one to hold or comfort me" will soon be fulfilled as God promises His comfort to those who trust Him. God bless you.
Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
May 7, 2019 at 8:09 AM
Dear Beata. Thank you. I accepted the Lord many, many years ago. I really should not be putting out the wrong message for I know my Saviors name. And know, beyond a doubt, as to where I'm going. (Where is your sting O death?) Thank you for your beautiful comments. Your brother in the Lord, Allen (John 3:16)
Andresen Avatar
May 7, 2019 at 3:49 AM
- A touching poem, Allen ... great written :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Romios Avatar
May 6, 2019 at 11:48 AM
Wow Allen...very creative, choice of topic. Panagiota
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