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Finality

Sweet smell of earth freshly turned over in which I lie below in damp darkness. Eyes, once needful, eternally asleep. The Holly tree that thrived throughout the years grows green and strong; I have no need of it. (nor do I remember it) in the place where I have gone. The silentness of voiceless nights, I cannot comprehend. nor a Robin's tune in leafy tree; or the song sung by a warm and gentle breeze. Plant lillies on my mound if you choose. It matters not to me. I remain alone, no one to hold or comfort me. winter, spring, summer, fall- now all the same to me.

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Date: 5/7/2019 8:48:00 AM
A powerful write!
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Date: 5/7/2019 6:29:00 AM
Thanks for the letting me reflect about the essence of finality. It's my prayer that your "I remain alone, no one to hold or comfort me" will soon be fulfilled as God promises His comfort to those who trust Him. God bless you.
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Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 5/7/2019 8:09:00 AM
Dear Beata. Thank you. I accepted the Lord many, many years ago. I really should not be putting out the wrong message for I know my Saviors name. And know, beyond a doubt, as to where I'm going. (Where is your sting O death?) Thank you for your beautiful comments. Your brother in the Lord, Allen (John 3:16)
Date: 5/7/2019 3:49:00 AM
- A touching poem, Allen ... great written :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/6/2019 11:48:00 AM
Wow Allen...very creative, choice of topic. Panagiota
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