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School, Holidays, Recovery, Leisure

leaves fall in hot wind
to be crushed by new school shoes
in morning's apple red sun

fireworks are cinders
as summer fades and calls us
to a last frenzy for fun

8/31/19

Writing Challenge 3, August 2019 - Six Lines
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Date: 9/3/2019 3:22:00 PM
Janis, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this fine Choka poem, well done !
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Date: 9/2/2019 5:08:00 PM
lovely imagery Janis, many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Janis Thompson
Date: 9/3/2019 1:19:00 PM
Thanks Jan. Good to hear from you.
Date: 9/2/2019 12:16:00 PM
- Congratulations on your great 2nd place, Janis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Janis Thompson
Date: 9/3/2019 1:21:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise..
Date: 9/2/2019 11:22:00 AM
Congrats on your top win!
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Janis Thompson
Date: 9/3/2019 1:21:00 PM
Thanks Jeanne. I appreciate it.
Date: 9/2/2019 11:08:00 AM
Wonderful win congrats!;)
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Janis Thompson
Date: 9/3/2019 1:22:00 PM
Thanks Brenda.
Date: 9/2/2019 10:42:00 AM
I am always sad to see summer end. Congrats on your win, Janis. John
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Janis Thompson
Date: 9/3/2019 1:22:00 PM
Many people try to hold on to summer. Thanks for your comments.
Date: 9/2/2019 10:10:00 AM
Congratulations for your top win.
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Janis Thompson
Date: 9/3/2019 1:23:00 PM
Thanks Victor.