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Final Prayer

FINAL PRAYER Flames singe his white flesh Sacrificed for displaced love Honor Honor Honor Mercy fires off a shot Thankful he bows his head Love Love Love A smile licks his lips Free to watch her salvation Heaven’s accepted him after all Kim Rodrigues © 2017

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Poetprentice Dupins

Date: 3/30/2017 12:20:00 AM

That last line worked really well! Great soup(poem).

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/30/2017 3:33:00 AM

Thank you!

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/29/2017 1:50:00 PM

Very well done Kim...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/29/2017 7:19:00 PM

Thank you, Charlie!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/29/2017 11:43:00 AM

Oh yes, the heavens are always delighted to increase their population by one more angel dearest, Kim! Inspiring my friend!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/29/2017 12:36:00 PM

Thank you, Demetrios! :)

Emile Pinet

Date: 3/29/2017 11:19:00 AM

Your words filled the page like the setting sun fills the sky, with beauty and grace. Emile.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/29/2017 11:27:00 AM

Thanks so much, wonderful poet Emile :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/29/2017 10:20:00 AM

Not the hero in "Last of the Mohicans" but one who in the end gave up his life for the life of the woman he loved. Movie is based on classic American book written by James Fenimore Cooper.