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Final Farewell

and then death came upon him under the cloak of the night three more breaths and silence an ending of suffering as a blessing to comfort the pain and demise the dashing man startling in his youth had been reduced to cachexia every last sip of water near torture a few crumbs of food an unwanted event the mouth of many a wisdom now quiet eyes closed in peace and tranquility when I have to go myself I wish for a quicker journey less prolonged agony fewer moments of ‘I am almost there’ his last words to me were there is Kai sitting in a corner and spreading peace and he now doubt overstated my presence life is precious and so is death a passing relief in a way an event with no before and no after so large is the trauma of being let go

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Date: 10/6/2022 5:53:00 AM
A beautiful sad poem Kai! Lovely…..Debx
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Date: 9/13/2022 7:51:00 AM
Insightful and soulful poem, Kai. Your last verse is powerful, deep, and wise. Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poetry my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill P.S. I'm following your poetry now.
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Date: 9/12/2022 4:45:00 PM
Well spoken,Kai: No doubt your presence gave him peace. Life passes by so quickly. Thanks for your insightful poem. SuZ
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 9/13/2022 5:26:00 AM
Well I hope your wish will be granted soon, Kai: The patter of little feet and a grandchild to spoil. Hugs, SuZ
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 9/13/2022 4:17:00 AM
Thank you Suzanne. We had a funeral and a wedding and now another death in the family. A birth is what we are missing now. But so far eight children 'stubbornly refuse'. Lots of wishes, Kai

Book: Shattered Sighs