Final Farewell

and then death came upon him
under the cloak of the night
three more breaths and silence
an ending of suffering as a blessing 
to comfort the pain and demise

the dashing man startling in his youth
had been reduced to cachexia
every last sip of water near torture
a few crumbs of food an unwanted event

the mouth of many a wisdom now quiet
eyes closed in peace and tranquility

when I have to go myself
I wish for a quicker journey
less prolonged agony
fewer moments of ‘I am almost there’

his last words to me were
there is Kai sitting in a corner
and spreading peace
and he now doubt overstated my presence

life is precious and so is death
a passing relief in a way
an event with no before and no after
so large is the trauma of being let go

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Date: 10/6/2022 5:53:00 AM
A beautiful sad poem Kai! Lovely…..Debx
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Date: 9/13/2022 7:51:00 AM
Insightful and soulful poem, Kai. Your last verse is powerful, deep, and wise. Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poetry my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill P.S. I'm following your poetry now.
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Date: 9/12/2022 4:45:00 PM
Well spoken,Kai: No doubt your presence gave him peace. Life passes by so quickly. Thanks for your insightful poem. SuZ
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 9/13/2022 5:26:00 AM
Well I hope your wish will be granted soon, Kai: The patter of little feet and a grandchild to spoil. Hugs, SuZ
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 9/13/2022 4:17:00 AM
Thank you Suzanne. We had a funeral and a wedding and now another death in the family. A birth is what we are missing now. But so far eight children 'stubbornly refuse'. Lots of wishes, Kai
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