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To see your gaze light the firmament To see your smile lift the sun It’s your eyes I see as the moon rises My heart hopes this is love begun You gaze through the space, do you see me? I watch in hope forlorn But my heart I want to give to thee You are the reason I was born. My love I can only send On rolled parchment now to you My life on you depends For in truth you love me too You gaze through the window I see you every day You face lights up as I pass Please speak to me I pray Although I am of lowly birth I am rich in love for you Please grant me a next meeting And we could start anew. I will do it right this time And ask your father’s grace But we both know it now Together is our place. A sign, my love, from where you sit And gaze each day t’wards me I promise my life, my love, my name As I promise to make a wife of thee. MT © 30 /7 /2014

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Kika Ayala

Date: 8/20/2014 12:54:00 AM

Beautiful write! Congratulations on a well-deserved win! Regards, Kika

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/17/2014 7:02:00 AM

OH MY MY MY...You ARE the Golden Girl. This is so so beautiful, Mandy. Oh...romantic and sweet. What a treat from you. A well deserved top win. Hugs, my dear.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 6/5/2023 10:24:00 PM

Would you believe it has taken Harry's death to make me re-read some of my poems, he used to re-read and comment all the time, I was bad at that and missed out on some wonderful comments, thank you, Eileen xx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/16/2014 10:40:00 PM

Enjoyed this lovely write, Mandy. congrats

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 8/17/2014 2:29:00 AM

Hi there Dr Ram and thanks for the congrats xx

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 8/16/2014 8:06:00 PM

beautiful write and congratulations on your win. God bless you and happy writing. With love and prayers, Gina

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 8/17/2014 2:29:00 AM

Aw thank you Regina xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/16/2014 7:46:00 PM

A wonderful win with this lovely entry Mandy. Big Congratulations!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 8/17/2014 2:28:00 AM

Thank you Connie xx

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 8/16/2014 6:00:00 PM

Wow, Mandy, I see your heart was really into it, Congrats

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 8/17/2014 2:28:00 AM

Thanks Jerry xx

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/16/2014 4:05:00 PM

A lovely write..congrats..Enjoy! BG

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 8/17/2014 2:28:00 AM

Thanks Barbara xx

Faye Gibson

Date: 8/16/2014 2:44:00 PM

Very well done, Mandy. Enjoyed this winning poem of yours. Congratulations.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 8/17/2014 2:28:00 AM

Thanks Faye xx

John Lawless

Date: 8/16/2014 2:11:00 PM

Congrats on the win.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 8/17/2014 2:27:00 AM

Thanks John xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/16/2014 1:25:00 PM

Congrats on ur winning awesome write Mandy!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 8/17/2014 2:27:00 AM

Thanks you Dr Upma , much appreciated xx

Jan Allison

Date: 8/16/2014 1:04:00 PM

Dropping back with my congratulations Mandy:-) Hugs Jan xx

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 8/17/2014 2:26:00 AM

Thank Jan will be visiting your wok very soon xx

Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 8/16/2014 12:35:00 PM

Warm, sweet, smooth. I admire this poem immensely. Many different feelings have been written down in a way that the reader can feel them too. That's what I like to see. Many congratulations!