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Fill My Heart With Light

Fill my sad heart with love's light before it's led astray Quill a poem so bright, it will chase sullen clouds away Thrill me with whispers tonight, so intimate that they will make me forget my fight for life is not a game I play Spill your ink and write about a friend who would betray Skill to be my heart's delight, but who chose not to stay Until happiness is in sight, I'll find peace only when I pray Hilltops with butterflies in flight will console my grief today Triple Rhyme Poetry Sponsored by Beth Evans Posted on July 8th, 2020

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Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/15/2020 2:13:00 PM

Oh this is is such a soothing verse Jenna! It fills my heart with colours and light and hopeful words of a beautiful world penned in ink. Congratulations on your top placement. Blessings and love :)

Jenna Logan
Date: 7/19/2020 5:35:00 AM

I really appreciate your kind review of my poem. Thank you, Aditi.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/12/2020 2:30:00 AM

Your triple rhyme blows me away; so well done! Bravo!

Jenna Logan
Date: 7/12/2020 4:11:00 AM

Hi Caren. Thank you very much for the kind remarks.

Eric Cohen

Date: 7/11/2020 2:25:00 PM

This is lovely Jenna. This flows so wonderfully throughout. I know how difficult that is to do. Congrats.

Jenna Logan
Date: 7/12/2020 4:10:00 AM

Thanks so much, Eric. It was a challenge. I kept changing my mind about which rhyming words to use.

John Watt

Date: 7/11/2020 12:11:00 PM

Jenna, a triple congrats for your triple rhyme: 1 - for your well-deserved win, 2 - for the wonderful way you crafted your rhymes and story into a cogent, flowing write, and 3 - for your first 1st place win, the first of many to come, I am sure. Now go enjoy those butterflies on the hill! ~ John

John Watt
Date: 7/12/2020 5:56:00 PM

Jenna, if it's any comfort, N/A doesn't always equate with "bad poem", just a highly competitive field, or a judge's particular bent, or mood that day. Save them for the N/A rerun contests and you'll see what I mean.

Jenna Logan
Date: 7/12/2020 4:09:00 AM

Triple thanks for your awesome comments, John. Along with my first 1st place were two N/As, so I tripped over a couple ladder rungs. lol I love watching the flutterers, and your comments.

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/11/2020 11:44:00 AM

A souper congrats!! on your win Jenna...awesome writing my friend...best wishes...^WW^ :o)

Jenna Logan
Date: 7/12/2020 4:06:00 AM

Thank you very much, Winged Warrior. I'm grateful for your visit.

Hilo Poet

Date: 7/11/2020 8:48:00 AM

Beautiful, Jenna, a lovely piece truly and my compliments winning 1st Place -- Aloha~@William

Jenna Logan
Date: 7/11/2020 8:51:00 AM

I'm honored by your compliments, William. Thank you.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/11/2020 8:35:00 AM

CONGRATS on your win with this fine poem, Jenna. LOVELY! Janice

Jenna Logan
Date: 7/11/2020 8:51:00 AM

Thank you so very much, Janice.

John Gondolf

Date: 7/11/2020 6:13:00 AM

Back to say congrats, Jenna, I see you scored a number 1 with this poem. Nicely done. John

Jenna Logan
Date: 7/11/2020 8:09:00 AM

Good morning, John, and thank you for returning with congratulations. You said to hang in and I did.

Chris Green

Date: 7/10/2020 11:41:00 AM

Wow, I looked at this contest as well and deemed it too difficult but you sure made it look easy. Beautifully done. Best wishes in the contest

Jenna Logan
Date: 7/10/2020 12:34:00 PM

Thank you for such kind words, Chris. It was challenging and receiving comments like yours has made it a worthwhile undertaking.

Mark Koplin

Date: 7/9/2020 8:21:00 AM

You truly have a gift of words dear Jenna! A well written work of art indeed. Good luck on your contest.

Jenna Logan
Date: 7/9/2020 6:53:00 PM

That's a very nice comment, Mark. Thank you.

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 7/8/2020 4:53:00 PM

Super write Jenna, really impressed with your triple rhyme having not seen it before was a joy to read it. Have a blessed day,Gordon

Jenna Logan
Date: 7/8/2020 6:46:00 PM

Thank you very much for reading and leaving your thoughts, Gordon.

John Gondolf

Date: 7/8/2020 4:51:00 PM

Sometimes it's nice to have a pleasant distraction to take our mind off the troubles of the day. Nicely done on the form, Jenna, I'm with Tom, three rhymes per line is a challenge. It's hard to do and stick to a set meter. I'm not sure if I will come up with anything for this contest or not. My best to you. Hugs, John

Jenna Logan
Date: 7/8/2020 6:45:00 PM

It was a challenge, and I changed my mind about which words to use several times before I said, "Enough." Thanks so much for your support, John.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/8/2020 3:42:00 PM

You wrote this so well Jenna, using the triple rhyme, I found it hard going using two. Good luck in the contest Tom

Jenna Logan
Date: 7/8/2020 6:44:00 PM

Thanks for the compliment and luck, Tom. I appreciate your reading me.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/8/2020 3:24:00 PM

Lovely write Jenna--your poem flows beautifully in well executed triple rhymes. A winning poem for me.

Jenna Logan
Date: 7/8/2020 6:43:00 PM

Thank you very much for your encouraging comments, Vijay.