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Fill-Ins - N Invitation For the Reader To Use Imagination

FILL-INS An invitation for the reader to use imagination Who? What? two fine ladies rest neath a bamboo umbrella they talk of a third? Fishermen small boat at anchor two men mend her tattered sail weather or old age? Pretty Song on the dogwood branches scarlet tanager and mate what song do they sing? New York blizzard snowy avenue many people like black streaks to or from their work? Interesting like Jackson Pollack this mishmash of dots and streaks is there a message? On the hike a meadow a stream with scattered pines wild flowers let’s have a picnic Baby Bear so easy to love he’s a shaggy, gray kitty always in the way .

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Date: 7/31/2014 10:58:00 PM
ahhh, these are sweet and so fun to read!! What a hodgepodge though!! Did they just all come to you in one day?
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Date: 7/29/2014 7:19:00 PM
It sounds lovely Daver, I like the sound of the baby bear purring in the way... Linda
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Date: 7/28/2014 2:16:00 PM
Careful thought behind each one Daver. Fisher. Pretty song and Baby bear are my three favorites of these. Always a pleasure to read your work.
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Date: 7/28/2014 8:20:00 AM
An enjoyable collection of haiku - glad I stopped by! Well done...
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Date: 7/28/2014 6:51:00 AM
I enjoyed these, I know with the website glitch it gets screwy, you can reformat your poem in the EDIT setting, then it comes out looking fine. I really did like your thought provoking pieces :) hugs
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