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hers once mine the hour glass of the sands of time mine fell from top to heavy bottom hers still young s l o w l y sift biding time each glass a decade mine four times turned over while she is only twice over with a twist of a wrist meaning half but i find my three times turned over is like a sand storm where i'm more then blinded by her eyes oh so youth ful filling sand dunes dooming me swallowing following falling down with the sands of time

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Date: 9/5/2019 8:20:00 AM
This is good, the half turned wrist is quite clever.
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 9/5/2019 6:11:00 PM
Thank you Richard.

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