Fighter

Carrying the weight on my shoulders,
That of hers and that of mine,
Always pressing like a boulder,
I say "No worries, everything's fine."

Keeping my head held high,
Convincing myself I am strong.
I hold back tears- she doesn't see me cry,
But it's been too long.

Standing alone, blade in hand,
Anything to make the load lighter.
The blood stops coming, upright I stand.
Perhaps after all, I'm not a fighter.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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February 12, 2014 at 8:53 AM
Well done Joe... xox..SKAT
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January 9, 2014 at 10:16 PM
Congratulations on this fine win, Joe
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January 7, 2014 at 3:39 PM
Joe, . Congratulations, and thank you for entering my contest. It has been a delight hosting so many contests. If you like you can enjoy the hugs, I left all winning poems on my blog "I WILL BE FAITHFUL." link-------> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=18505&PoetID=18720 <----- Enjoy and stop by if you'd like...... Always & Forever ** LINDA
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January 2, 2014 at 9:50 PM
Joe, intense with a moving end... , I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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January 2, 2014 at 8:16 PM
Very deep, Joe, . Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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January 2, 2014 at 7:07 PM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Joe !! A good poem - :)) - Head up. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck !! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more .... another day :) - All the best for the year 2014 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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