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Viking Swords - Stavanger, Norway

- Fight With Dragons and Wolves -

Take me into the realm of your midnight dreams awakening sleep 
Bring us to a higher level far away from misery and despair
Where waves through oceans are kissed by a salted breeze blowing 

A place where mind can fly upon strong waves, straight lines on white sheets
Trembling currents grasp one breathless moment holding time 
No one will not lead us, even if it blows up to storm force gale 

Circle of twilight's halo under magic spells cast breathing fire starbursts 
Stars living on self produced energy under horizon's steps forward 
A mirror reflection of a faraway kingdom reflecting of the sun 

Faced with light internally stored faithful mercy yields 
We call life a mystery unforgettable the words of faith, hope and love
Crowning angels you came before me a queen 

Defeating the dragons and fighting wolves from preying sacrifice 
We find a personal point of common ground held in between world's 
Viewing life as the canvas we paint upon our memories 










29.04.2017
(Unrhymed tercets)
A Collaborated Poem 
Anne-Lise Andresen and Liam Mc Daid
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Darlene De Beaulieu May 24, 2017 at 8:23 PM Sunshine Smile I have enjoyed this poem.I felt like I was part of this poem. Yes and I also found it to be spiritualas well. Well done. Anne-Lise Andresen May 25, 2017 at 8:00 AM - Many thanks for your visit and lovely comments, Darlene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lynn Marie May 12, 2017 at 1:03 AM A beautiful collaboration on the richness of life that is possible when all senses are enacted and present through every day life. When ones spirit is intune, is where true life and true love can be found and nurtured and your gorgeous poem is a celebration of the best of us. Wonderful, spiritual sentiments, fabulous writing Anne-Lise and Liam:) lynnxxx Anne-Lise Andresen May 12, 2017 at 3:12 AM - Many thanks for your visit and lovely comments, Lynn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Freddie Robinson Jr. May 10, 2017 at 1:59 PM Beautiful collab poem, Anne-Lise and Liam. Very spiritual and intelligently written. Well crafted poetry on display. A 7! Lots of love and hugs. Anne-Lise Andresen May 10, 2017 at 2:02 PM - Glad you like it, Freddie :) - Thank you very much, especially for a 7 :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maurice Yvonne May 1, 2017 at 4:43 PM A great collaboration. Congratulations to you both, a fav with lots of love, armand. Anne-Lise Andresen May 3, 2017 at 3:27 AM - Nice to see you, Armand .... thanks for the great feedback on Liams and my poem - Special thanks for a 7 and fav. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman May 1, 2017 at 3:58 PM Anne-Lise and Liam, Congratulations on the POTD honor here!! Your combined efforts with the imagery, the metaphors, and the wondrous nature of the five stanzas here are marvelous. The very last verse of the poem, "Viewing life . . ." completes the picture perfectly. Superb!! SEVEN/FAVE!! Cheers and Best, Gary Anne-Lise Andresen May 3, 2017 at 3:24 AM - Always a great honor with a seven + fav. Gary :) - Thank you for your congratulations and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anne-Marie Coreggia May 1, 2017 at 9:04 AM Congratulations on PotD for this incredible write which still breathes its fire into my mind:) Amitiés Anne-Lise Andresen May 3, 2017 at 3:23 AM - Anne-Marie, thank you for your congratulations and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith May 1, 2017 at 12:12 AM Congratulations on a great collaboration and POTD honors, well done... Anne-Lise Andresen May 3, 2017 at 3:22 AM - Thank you for your congratulations and lovely comments, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Emile Pinet April 30, 2017 at 1:25 PM Your collaboration with Liam, kindled my imagination and stirred my heart. A very moving and heart felt poem, thought provoking, and yet gentle. Emile. Anne-Lise Andresen May 3, 2017 at 3:20 AM - Glad you like it, Emile :) - Many thanks for your visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid April 30, 2017 at 10:51 AM anne lise congratulations on poem of the day your pen gave it the golden glow of fire smiling i pray you have a blessed day pal Anne-Lise Andresen May 3, 2017 at 3:18 AM - There are two "p.o.t.d." today .... this fell completely away .... it's not our poem that appears when you enter this page ... sad - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux April 30, 2017 at 9:39 AM Wow to both of you! What an epic write! 7! Anne-Lise Andresen May 3, 2017 at 3:14 AM - Thank you very much, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jerry T Curtis April 30, 2017 at 5:51 AM A Very thought provoking piece, enjoyed reading it --- you two work well together Anne-Lise Andresen May 3, 2017 at 3:13 AM - Thank you very much, Jerry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maria Williams April 30, 2017 at 4:41 AM Impressive and Outstanding Anne-Lise. A very strong collaboration between you and Liam . Loved it. A 7++ Anne-Lise Andresen May 3, 2017 at 3:12 AM - Glad you like it, my friend Maria :) - Thank you very much, especially for a 7 :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sunlite Wanter April 29, 2017 at 6:47 PM Thank you two for taking me away for a few imaginary moments. Anne-Lise Andresen May 3, 2017 at 3:11 AM - Many thanks for your visit and lovely comments, Sunlite :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid April 29, 2017 at 5:51 PM always a pleasure joining pen with you anne lise your ink shone golden through passing you a warm smile thank you pal i pray your weekend is blessed beautiful Anne-Lise Andresen May 3, 2017 at 3:11 AM - Thank you, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper April 29, 2017 at 4:25 PM A wonderful collaboration, Sunshine, love the theme ~* Anne-Lise Andresen May 3, 2017 at 3:08 AM - A pleasure with your visit, Eve :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud April 29, 2017 at 1:35 PM such a powerful write brimming with imagery from the both of you, anne... lovely theme.. happy huggss Anne-Lise Andresen April 29, 2017 at 1:40 PM - Thank you very much, Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis April 29, 2017 at 1:14 PM Your collaboration with Liam dear, Anne-Lise, always produces brilliant results and this is not an exemption! A 7 to each of you! Anne-Lise Andresen April 29, 2017 at 1:22 PM - Glad you like it, my friend :) - Thank you very much, especially for a 7 :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)