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Fig Leaf

On the shadowed banks of river they sat together Adulating setting sun quivering in rippling currents Where golden filaments shimmered on blue water Forming and breaking ephemeral circular motions Undulating amber rays on eve’s buoyant emotions. Her dimples smiled upon her visage of royal poise Enticing him to probe her cheerful, enamored eyes Mesmerizing as yet un-blossomed amatory dreams As they raved of college, friends, late nights carefree Exploring coyly maiden impulses of mature themes Inflaming seductively, untrodden clues of fantasies. Alas! those memories now~ dulcet still, but empty. Never he saw her again on her side of the prairies Strolling nonchalantly, engrossed in birds chirping, No one standing there now to steal his glances slyly Hiding behind notions of secrecy, at first meekly, Though later, quite daringly, wantonly, frequently; Elevating him unlike anyone else, before, or since. Her last letter to him was cryptic, yet informative: A rustic farm house, cow moos amid clucking sounds, Boy and a girl, flower beds, and a dog named Duffy~ A simple life on landscapes lauding ancestral heritage. He remembers well~ saying it, genuinely meaning it, As movingly she indulged in life that could have been, Awkwardly dropping hints, soon she’ll be married. Yet, here she is now intimating, she too so loved him~ Validating his belief—though offering a mere fig leaf-- A vain gesture to convince him she honored his dream Memorializing secret pact, living life in his blueprint: Boy and a girl, rustic farm house, a dog named Duffy. April 12, 2022 Poem of the day on April 14, 2022 Placed 1st: This or That, Vol 11 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Edward Ibeh Title chosen: Fig Leaf

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Date: 12/8/2023 12:30:00 PM
This is lovely storytelling Vijay...I can see why it was a successful poem..
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Date: 7/24/2023 10:23:00 PM
A touching tale of bittersweet reminiscence. Belated congratulations Vijay.
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Date: 4/29/2022 5:55:00 PM
Wow, this is an amazing poem Vijay, and sort of sad. Very intriguing, well done!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/7/2022 11:17:00 AM
Thank you BJ--always a joy when you visit.
Date: 4/25/2022 8:18:00 AM
his is excellent Vijay and a most deserved win for the contest. I could see a young man on his farm reading a letter from a long lost love and remembering the time they spent together and a life that could have been. Love it. God Bless and congrats, JB
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/25/2022 9:43:00 AM
Much appreciate, Judy--many thanks.
Date: 4/24/2022 1:38:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/25/2022 9:43:00 AM
Thank you Terry.
Date: 4/23/2022 10:45:00 AM
such a sweet poem. VERY well done. Congrats on your win. I was so uninspired by this contest, my Ides of march got me nothing. haha.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/25/2022 9:43:00 AM
Many thanks Andrea. Much appreciate.
Date: 4/23/2022 5:32:00 AM
This is my third visit to your wonderful poem, Vijay! I am saddened by the touching turn of events ! Dreams that couldn't be realized and longings that still leave a tormenting pain within ! Congratulations on your great win.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/25/2022 9:42:00 AM
Much appreciate Valsa--many thanks.
Date: 4/22/2022 8:23:00 PM
A very beautiful story symbolically said. Congratulations!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/25/2022 9:42:00 AM
Thank you Christuraj.
Date: 4/22/2022 12:31:00 PM
Spectacular write, as usual, Vijay:-) Storytelling at its finest! Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest, and for winning POTD!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/25/2022 9:42:00 AM
So very kind of you. Much appreciate, Edward--many thanks for sponsoring contests with wonderful themes.
Date: 4/22/2022 11:29:00 AM
And back with another congratulations for a top contest win!
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Date: 4/25/2022 9:41:00 AM
Thank you for the return visit, Kim. Much appreciate.
Date: 4/22/2022 10:44:00 AM
Vijay, your poem easily moves between hope and love lost - between a dream and stark reality. This story is so wonderfully and captivatingly told - set in a scene of romantic beauty. Congratulations on your win! Easter blessings.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/25/2022 9:40:00 AM
Thank you Sam--much appreciate.
Date: 4/22/2022 9:25:00 AM
Back with congratulations on your top contest win dear, Vijay. Words are not enough...Masterfully done!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/25/2022 9:40:00 AM
Thank you Lasaad--much appreciate.
Date: 4/21/2022 7:31:00 PM
What a romantic story, though too little, too late, congratulations on your POTD, Vijay:)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/22/2022 5:22:00 AM
Thank you Jo.
Date: 4/18/2022 7:11:00 AM
Wow, love this Vijay, so deserving of POTD.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/22/2022 5:22:00 AM
Thank you Harry.
Date: 4/17/2022 7:43:00 PM
One could help but be impressed by the way this poem has evolved. I'm not sure how I missed this literary treasure being featured as POTD,  Vijay. You should be delighted with your well-deserved recognition! It has everything, as well as excellent metaphors and feelings. An amazing poem based on empathy, with love hidden in a mysterious message, written by a poet of great talent. I really liked every word, and you once again infused it with such vivid images! Added to my Fave.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/22/2022 5:22:00 AM
So very kind of you my friend. Your comments are insightful as always, Lassad. Much appreciate the time you take to offer complimentary remarks. Many thanks. And a very special thanks you for the FAVE.
Date: 4/17/2022 8:48:00 AM
Awesome that your poem was chosen as poem of the day. Way to go. Visiting again with congrats. Sara
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/17/2022 10:04:00 AM
Much appreciate your return visit Sara--many thanks.
Date: 4/17/2022 5:12:00 AM
Somehow I missed seeing this poetic gem as POTD. Rejoice on your much deserved honor, Vijay !
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/17/2022 10:04:00 AM
Thank you Valsa--much appreciate.
Date: 4/16/2022 5:38:00 PM
You are always so very creative with your subject, nicely etched, on my mind, a great poem to end the evening with Vijay, Happy Easter blessings from my heart :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/17/2022 10:03:00 AM
Thank you my friend. Happy Easter to you.
Date: 4/16/2022 10:24:00 AM
Hi Vijay, I confess, I am a hopeless case, always late with a comment, but for ever and an age, I would never forget to visit your bewitching poetry page. Congratulations dear friend on an enchanting poem - an honor that was so richly deserved, POTD. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/17/2022 10:03:00 AM
Thank you Jennifer--much appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 4/16/2022 4:22:00 AM
Happy Easter my friend. Resurrection is proof positive for mere mortals. And warm congrats. Anil Deo PTL
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/17/2022 10:02:00 AM
Thank you Anil. Much appreciate.
Date: 4/14/2022 9:00:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on POTD. God bless you. Love, Gina
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/15/2022 4:50:00 AM
So very kind of you. Many thanks Gina.
Date: 4/14/2022 7:56:00 PM
Those moments of what could have been, still linger. Congratulations Vijay, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. ~ Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/15/2022 4:49:00 AM
Thank you my friend for your return visit. Always a joy.
Date: 4/14/2022 4:49:00 PM
Congratulations, Vijay, on your POTD honour. Perhaps once in a while..we all dream about what could have been! Beautifully rendered! All the best ~ Mala
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/15/2022 4:49:00 AM
Much appreciate, Mala, your visit and kind remarks. Many thanks.
Date: 4/14/2022 2:14:00 PM
Vijay, a wonderful write. Congratulations on POTD~ Warren
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/14/2022 4:39:00 PM
Glad you stopped by Warren with kind feedback. Much appreciate--many thanks.
Date: 4/14/2022 1:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD Vijay! Yes, I recall well how life may have been different, for me and a treasured loved one of the distant past...we just had different destinies perhaps -- Lovely writing!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/14/2022 4:38:00 PM
Well said Joe--life is not always as predictable as we would like. Much appreciate you stopping by with your kind insights. Many thanks.
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