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at times the soul gets clenched in an unspeakable grief in a demoniac grip, it chokes and wriggles the pain of being stung by a dozen scorpions or hacked piece by piece by an axe tremulous grows the heart, over love that is spent seeks in vain to revive the joy that is gone strains to lift the veil that shrouds the soul wrestles to come out from the desolate cave of black solitude the more it struggles to wade through the mess the deeper it plunges into the morass of despair clung on talons of excruciating pain, wailing a long wail of never being understood the mind goes berserk whirling and churning. anytime the volcano might erupt, emitting pyroclastic cloud with the asphalt lava spilling out, blowing life with its violent breath. yet, have succeeded in putting on a merry visage during day laughs with the laughing crowd but retires at night to the solitary cell to release, in agonized sighs, the stifling anguish and soak the pillow in a flood of tears how long can one seek to hide oneself in the cover of vapid cheerfulness…..? why try to save the face when there is no face to lose? sure the fig leaf will one day fall off to stand in stark nakedness before the world aghast
April.2.2022 This or That, Vol.11.Poetry Contest Topic-Fig Leaf Sponsor- Edward Ibeh

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Date: 4/24/2022 2:00:00 PM
An extraordinary piece, Valsa, that words fittingly enhance meaningfully. The unsurprised winning outcome recognizes its righteous attributes my friend, Aloha~William
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Date: 4/24/2022 1:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 4/23/2022 4:53:00 AM
Wow! I love this, one day fig leaf will fall off. To my fave. Congratulations on your well-deserved win and this outstanding write my dear friend! Thanks for sharing! God bless. Hugs
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Date: 4/22/2022 8:21:00 PM
Coming back to congratulate you. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/22/2022 11:28:00 AM
Great line before the one most mentioned “ why try to save the face when there is no face to lose?” Congratulations, Valsa, on top win!”
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Date: 4/22/2022 10:39:00 AM
Our chaotic souls exposed in your flowing images and thoughts Valsa! Your poem stands in naked truth with no fig leaf to hide our humanness. Wonderfully done. Congratulations on your win! Sending you Easter season blessings.
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Date: 4/22/2022 9:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poem and your top win in this contest! Dear Valsa, I don't know how I missed such sublime writing, in which you explained very well your mind. Words are not enough... Masterfully done!
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Date: 4/22/2022 8:00:00 AM
Wow, what a sublime piece here, Valsa:-) I'm floored by it. Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest!
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Date: 4/22/2022 8:40:00 AM
Thank you so much Edward ! Thanks also for your great encouragement and the kind words of inspiration. So far, your contests have been a pleasure for me and I think I could do moderately well in your contests !
Date: 4/6/2022 7:04:00 PM
ThanX for exposing all our minds here. We are prophetic poets when we choose ( Ukraine & Russia) but not on ourselves. U exposed yourself/ourselves. PTL shalom shalom
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Date: 4/22/2022 8:47:00 AM
This is not a singular experience . All of us play a hide and seek game covering our real self with a fig leaf ! Thank you so much Anil for finding a universal element in my poem....
Date: 4/4/2022 7:48:00 AM
You have explained your mind well here "the mind goes berserk whirling and churning. anytime the volcano might erupt, emitting pyroclastic cloud with the asphalt lava spilling out, blowing life with its violent breath."
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Date: 4/22/2022 8:44:00 AM
Sometimes the mind enters such a state when we feel that the worst might happen ! Usually after such bouts of dejection, a calm settles. Thanks a lot Caren !
Date: 4/2/2022 10:09:00 PM
Lovely and deep. Good imagery.
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Date: 4/22/2022 8:42:00 AM
Thanks a lot poet friend ! So glad for your visit to my page .
Date: 4/2/2022 5:18:00 PM
Masterpiece!!! The eloquence of this poem runs through my veins. Words are not enough....Masterfully done! A sure win!
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Date: 4/2/2022 6:52:00 PM
Feel so overjoyed and humbled by your profuse words of praise.... ! Thanks a lot Jez !
Date: 4/2/2022 12:13:00 PM
When we face judgment day there will be no fig leaves to hide our wrongdoings. Good luck in the contest Valsa. Tom
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Date: 4/2/2022 6:50:00 PM
I too do believe in it Tom. A fig leaf cannot hide our wrong doings for long ! Thank you so much Tom for your kind comment !
Date: 4/2/2022 5:05:00 AM
Well described travails of soul, Valsa. Feigning can only last for so long--ultimately the mask will come off and true feelings get revealed. Win BIG!
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Date: 4/2/2022 6:48:00 PM
Yes, we cannot feign for long what is not inside ! Rightly said ! Thanks a lot Vijay !
Date: 4/2/2022 3:31:00 AM
"sure the fig leaf will one day fall off" - True. Great writing.
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Date: 4/2/2022 4:35:00 AM
Thanks a lot Chris ..... the one who pens poems on any topic like hot cakes !
Date: 4/2/2022 1:54:00 AM
Great vocabulary. great imagery, great construction. In short you've written a great poem Best for a win. A fave.
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Date: 4/2/2022 4:34:00 AM
Thanks a lot dear Victor ! Feel enthused !

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