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Fifty-Three Shades of Grey

in the uncoloured tint of another everyday amongst the spit polished waxed apples tightly packed in burlap bags they walked like minded in their own burly wrap oblivious to the irony to their similarity of the markets round red fruit unaware of the tragedy the horror of events yet to come it will rain metal shrapnel as human minds grasp with the purpose of their existence as in their ignorance they understand their worth as human bombs with a belief the heavens will open the gates with a fanfare and a promised blessing for their divine act of unquestioned belief the clay shaped bricks the black iron metal stairs the drum sound of engines then the lull not after but before before the pulse of the storm the rain of death yet this moment captured this photograph with man and child in hand smells sweet you wonder bemused why? the world travels aimlessly singularly no one nothing in the universe suggests exposes even a hint even a glimpse not a clue that would lead reveal an answer. life in its contradiction like the proverbial apple offers both the miracle the curse.
09/23/2014
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Kendrick Avatar
January 19, 2015 at 5:50 AM
Interesting work..Congrats on your great win..Sara
Deschler Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 2:03 AM
Your writing has a unique way of grasping the reader by the soul and moving them emotionally. Which is what I think true poetry is all about... Congrats on the win, Armand. An excellent write!
Fraser Avatar
January 16, 2015 at 12:49 PM
You sure can write Maurice, that's a fact. Powerful and deep is this piece. It totally amazes me as to what people come up with from their minds, quite incredible to be honest. Many congrats, James :)
Callus Avatar
January 16, 2015 at 12:02 PM
I like the way you meander through your mind and express what you see and feel through words....depth of thought in this case. Well done! #7 and congrats on your high placing. // paul
A   Avatar
January 15, 2015 at 10:11 PM
Thank you so much Armand, for enjoying the win :) LINDA
Yvonne Avatar
January 16, 2015 at 12:33 PM
I more than enjoyed my win Linda it has helped me personally with a rough patch I am going through. You are an amazing poet and an incredible human being. I wish you everything and more. Lots Of Love Always Armand
Mohn Avatar
January 15, 2015 at 8:36 PM
What a great poem Maurice...fantastic!
Meier-Hans Avatar
January 15, 2015 at 8:15 PM
Glad to see you placed so well with this great poem Maurice. Nice to read it again.
Haight Avatar
January 15, 2015 at 7:19 PM
So very moving, Maurice...I also got goose bumps...and your last five lines says so much. Congratulations on your well-deserved win. 7+Fav, Sandra
May Avatar
January 15, 2015 at 1:30 PM
Very well written Maurice....Congrats on your win...
Mcdaid Avatar
January 15, 2015 at 12:40 PM
excellent piece of writing maurice congratulations on your win pal thumbs up
Allison Avatar
January 15, 2015 at 4:32 AM
I'm so glad to see this again Maurice - outstanding poem my friend:-) love and hugs Jan xxx
A. Sharma Avatar
January 15, 2015 at 1:23 AM
Poetic marvel Maurice! Congrats on big win!
Kayode Avatar
January 15, 2015 at 12:59 AM
a well done marriage between words and Picture,my friend Maurice is the poetic priest;congrats on the win...huggs
A   Avatar
January 14, 2015 at 10:38 PM
Maurice:) Stopping by to say hi and wish you the best when it comes to any soup contest. Congratulations, on your win. Stop by my latest blog "A Penny For Your Thoughts." If you'd like:) Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Yvonne Avatar
January 15, 2015 at 12:57 PM
Thank you Linda, love you lots, Armand.
Kimathi Avatar
October 18, 2014 at 5:30 AM
Hi Maurice. The layout, tone, and plot of your poem is awesome! Congrats for having it featured in PS's homepage! :-)
Allison Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 5:57 PM
I found this on the home page as my poem is also featured - how did I miss this before Maurice - the title - cheeky and drew me in ..... I was expecting something else - the photo and poem perfectly compliment one another. Your pen is golden my friend as are you:-) hugs jan xx
Yaseen Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 11:00 PM
I can say you have painted the above picture with your colourful words, it is perfectly done, your pen shines Sir.... Can there be a more than Highest Rate,I can give to this.... Again to say, splendid work done Sir.
Yvonne Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 11:13 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 9:56 AM
very deep write Maurice.. :) love every line in this poem.. :) ill make it my fave as it touched me..
Yvonne Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 4:57 PM
Thank you so much Olive. I love it when another poet favs my poem. It is a great compliment.
Vaso Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 10:54 PM
Maurice you have outdone yourself! This poem is one of the best I have read in a long time, and if ever a photo and a poem belong together this is it. You are very talented kind sir!
Yvonne Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 4:56 PM
arthur, I always enjoy your visits. I have loved the last of your writes that I had a chance to read. I'm not even sure what I just wrote is English.
Richards Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 6:53 PM
This is one of the best of the best poems I've read, in spite of the sad telling of the human condition. Wow, simple stunning is your poetry ! I bow to your talent!
Yvonne Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 4:54 PM
Carrie I am so happy you liked it. You are such an amazing writer.
Onclaud Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 12:16 PM
how compelling can this be, maurice.. like I would always say, this is the other side of our life; kinda like yin and yang.. superb, sad, significant!.. huggs
Yvonne Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 12:53 PM
You are always so positive in your kind comments, thank you.
Trifiatis Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 3:40 AM
Thought provoking! Menditative poem that its effect cannot be percjeved at once! Excellent dear Maurice!
Yvonne Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 12:51 PM
thank you my friend.
Mcdaid Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 2:59 AM
very beautifully penned maurice with great depth excellent piece
Yvonne Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 11:32 AM
I appreciate your giving comments. Thank You
Dietrich Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 12:51 AM
by the way, I was expecting something else from this title. Naughty boy!
Yvonne Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 11:31 AM
I have an extensive background in marketing for many different reasons. I didn't figure "sometimes life sucks" would draw a lot of viewers. So as per your implication, Guilty As Charged! I am a naughty boy!
Dietrich Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 12:45 AM
Maurice, this is a deep one! Yes, there is so much irony in this huge wonderful world of ours and so much tragedy. You have captured all of that. The lull before the painful storm. Oh my!! So was this a famous picture that was taken right before a bombing? I rarely see or read the news any more. Would like to know the story behind your thoughtful poem.
Yvonne Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 11:28 AM
When my imagination is dry, I search photos on the internet. I download a bunch that I like. Then I stare at the photograph until it speaks to me. I write what it dictates.
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