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Fifty Miles

It's fifty miles to the city And fifty home again, Around that pothole on Depot Road Into the arms of the lane. Old George has left his hay down. A day or two since mowing. Pink shadow of the Grange Hall, Blind in sun's last glowing. The cows are gathered to the barn, Tail switching at the gate, Udders glossy ripe with milk. Supper'll have to wait. Take down the bucket and strainer, Rite of the ending day. Bury the sound of city streets, In the sweet whisper of hay. Bow your head to the great brown side, A choir in the gentle refrain: Fifty...miles... to the...city, Fifty miles to the lane.

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Date: 7/31/2022 7:46:00 PM
This so haunting and lyrical. Seems like a country song with a mysterious message to me. Excellent penning, Elizabeth! Really enjoyed. Thanks, Gershon
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Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 7/31/2022 9:45:00 PM
So kind of you to comment, Gershon. Of course we wouldn't need poetry if we didn't want weave in subversive subtleties! Elizabeth
Date: 7/17/2022 9:23:00 AM
Wow Elizabeth…..I love this poem….it flows beautifully! Debx
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Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 7/17/2022 4:49:00 PM
Thanks, Deb. I'mso pleased you liked it!

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