Fifty Miles

It's fifty miles to the city
And fifty home again,
Around that pothole on Depot Road
Into the arms of the lane.

Old George has left his hay down.
A day or two since mowing.
Pink shadow of the Grange Hall,
Blind in sun's last glowing.

The cows are gathered to the barn,
Tail switching at the gate, 
Udders glossy ripe with milk.
Supper'll have to wait.

Take down the bucket and strainer, 
Rite of the ending day.
Bury the sound of city streets,
In the sweet whisper of hay.

Bow your head to the great brown side, 
A choir in the gentle refrain:
Fifty...miles... to the...city,
Fifty miles to the lane.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Wolf Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 7:46 PM
This so haunting and lyrical. Seems like a country song with a mysterious message to me. Excellent penning, Elizabeth! Really enjoyed. Thanks, Gershon
Mccann Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 9:45 PM
So kind of you to comment, Gershon. Of course we wouldn't need poetry if we didn't want weave in subversive subtleties! Elizabeth
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July 17, 2022 at 9:23 AM
Wow Elizabeth…..I love this poem….it flows beautifully! Debx
Mccann Avatar
July 17, 2022 at 4:49 PM
Thanks, Deb. I'mso pleased you liked it!
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