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Fifth Place

Dimming light
candles flicker
Dry ink
No parchment found
Wonder within thought
Imaged sounds
Tracing
Back in time
A rhyme
Verse appeared
A Contest
With Constance La France
My chance to win Yalto
First
But 5th place is fine


Contest: Writing Challenge-Yalto Form
Sponsored by: Constance La France
Date Created: 12/13/2022

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Constance La France Date: 12/28/2022 7:16:00 AM Bobby, your Yalto is delightful and made me smile, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - Yalto Form, well done, blessings Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/20/2022 10:16:00 AM - But, we won't say no to a first place :) - Congratulations, Bobby :) - hugs Login to Reply Bobby May Date: 12/20/2022 3:24:00 PM Thank you, Anne-Lise

Ann Peck Date: 12/20/2022 9:06:00 AM How about first place :) Congratulations for your poem of contentedness with Fifth! Login to Reply Bobby May Date: 12/20/2022 3:26:00 PM Thanks Ann

Sara Kendrick Date: 12/20/2022 4:39:00 AM Congratulations on this winner. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara Login to Reply Bobby May Date: 12/20/2022 3:26:00 PM Thank you, Sara

Christuraj Alex Date: 12/20/2022 12:47:00 AM Very interesting written. You are 1st. Congratulations! Login to Reply Bobby May Date: 12/20/2022 3:25:00 PM Thank You!

Anisha Dutta Date: 12/19/2022 11:17:00 PM Big Congrats to win. Have Good Days. Login to Reply Bobby May Date: 12/20/2022 3:25:00 PM Thank You!

Kim Rodrigues Date: 12/19/2022 6:55:00 PM Congratulations, Bobby! Login to Reply Bobby May Date: 12/20/2022 3:25:00 PM Thanks Kim!! Merry Christmas Sis!

Edward Ibeh Date: 12/19/2022 3:46:00 PM Nice one, Bobby! Your tongue-in-cheek Yalto is a deserving top place winner! Write more, my friend. Congratulations on your top win! Login to Reply Bobby May Date: 12/19/2022 4:26:00 PM Thank You Sir and thank you for inventing this new form! Have a great holiday!

Reason A. Poteet Date: 12/19/2022 1:35:00 PM Looks like a first place to me, we’ll done tongue in cheek Login to Reply Bobby May Date: 12/19/2022 4:26:00 PM Thank You!!

Gershon Wolf Date: 12/14/2022 10:18:00 PM Bobby, it sounds like you and the 'creatures of the night' holed up in the attic somewhere, producing miraculous verse from gossamer cobwebs and spidery mirth! Wow! You are DA MAN! Login to Reply Bobby May Date: 12/15/2022 5:54:00 AM ha ha ha ha Thanks GW

Valsa George Date: 12/13/2022 10:20:00 PM You are very modest in your wish Bobby. A beautiful poem in Yalto form. All the Best to you ! Login to Reply Bobby May Date: 12/14/2022 11:15:00 AM Thank you Valsa!