Bobby May Poet Verse

Fifth Place

Dimming light
candles flicker
Dry ink
No parchment found
Wonder within thought
Imaged sounds
Tracing
Back in time
A rhyme
Verse appeared
A Contest
With Constance La France
My chance to win Yalto
First
But 5th place is fine


Contest: Writing Challenge-Yalto Form
Sponsored by: Constance La France
Date Created: 12/13/2022

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Constance La France December 28, 2022 at 7:16 AM Bobby, your Yalto is delightful and made me smile, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - Yalto Form, well done, blessings

Anne-Lise Andresen December 20, 2022 at 10:16 AM - But, we won't say no to a first place :) - Congratulations, Bobby :) - hugs Bobby May December 20, 2022 at 3:24 PM Thank you, Anne-Lise

Ann Peck December 20, 2022 at 9:06 AM How about first place :) Congratulations for your poem of contentedness with Fifth! Bobby May December 20, 2022 at 3:26 PM Thanks Ann

Sara Kendrick December 20, 2022 at 4:39 AM Congratulations on this winner. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara Bobby May December 20, 2022 at 3:26 PM Thank you, Sara

Christuraj Alex December 20, 2022 at 12:47 AM Very interesting written. You are 1st. Congratulations! Bobby May December 20, 2022 at 3:25 PM Thank You!

Anisha Dutta December 19, 2022 at 11:17 PM Big Congrats to win. Have Good Days. Bobby May December 20, 2022 at 3:25 PM Thank You!

Kim Rodrigues December 19, 2022 at 6:55 PM Congratulations, Bobby! Bobby May December 20, 2022 at 3:25 PM Thanks Kim!! Merry Christmas Sis!

Edward Ibeh December 19, 2022 at 3:46 PM Nice one, Bobby! Your tongue-in-cheek Yalto is a deserving top place winner! Write more, my friend. Congratulations on your top win! Bobby May December 19, 2022 at 4:26 PM Thank You Sir and thank you for inventing this new form! Have a great holiday!

Reason A. Poteet December 19, 2022 at 1:35 PM Looks like a first place to me, we’ll done tongue in cheek Bobby May December 19, 2022 at 4:26 PM Thank You!!

Gershon Wolf December 14, 2022 at 10:18 PM Bobby, it sounds like you and the 'creatures of the night' holed up in the attic somewhere, producing miraculous verse from gossamer cobwebs and spidery mirth! Wow! You are DA MAN! Bobby May December 15, 2022 at 5:54 AM ha ha ha ha Thanks GW

Valsa George December 13, 2022 at 10:20 PM You are very modest in your wish Bobby. A beautiful poem in Yalto form. All the Best to you ! Bobby May December 14, 2022 at 11:15 AM Thank you Valsa!