Fifo Breaststroke

A fellow who lost his titmouse*
Met a lass in a see-through blouse
It is hard to believe
But it seems her left sleeve
Was the safest place in the house!

*Baeolophus bicolour
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Krutsinger Avatar
March 17, 2022 at 2:21 AM
This is hilarous!
Leffanta Avatar
March 17, 2022 at 11:07 AM
Mahalo nui loa! Aloha!
Faulkner Avatar
March 10, 2022 at 8:32 PM
I would not want to be in that house!
Cunningham Avatar
March 8, 2022 at 12:42 PM
Lol, I can just picture the scene. Tom
Baker Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 3:39 PM
Enjoyed your Limerick, Rico. Funny situation for sure. Bill
Roper Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 2:16 PM
Hilarious! Too often all one sees nowadays women with see-through blouses
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