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Fiery Waltz

My heart remembers Collecting fireflies in jars With cousins I loved We shared these twinkling sparks, lights Of vibrant, dancing spirits Firefly Tanka Poetry Contest Sponsored by: JCB Brul March 10, 2022

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Date: 3/20/2022 10:56:00 AM
Collecting fireflies is a fun memory for me. Thanks for pushing the memory button for me. :-) Bill
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Date: 3/17/2022 10:25:00 PM
ahhh, yes, I too loved doing this with my friends and cousins. Lovely. And congrats.
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Date: 3/17/2022 9:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A fun write. I also had fun collecting fireflies in a jar on summer nights. A great memory. Have a blessed day writing away...............
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Date: 3/17/2022 4:51:00 AM
"twinkling sparks" - Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/16/2022 12:35:00 PM
Beautiful; this contest brought out many childhood memories. Congratulations.
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Date: 3/10/2022 6:35:00 PM
Was a fond mystery, how they lit! Nicely said, Regina.
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Date: 3/10/2022 4:56:00 PM
Beautiful, Gina. Memories are precious! Love ~ Mala
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Date: 3/10/2022 7:09:00 AM
Nostalgic! Beautifully done, Regina! Brings back childhood memories
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