Fiery Rain

Forgoing the fiery flight,
this beautiful thistle tries to shine,
Glorious grieving moon- gleams,

Soft suspicious taps suddenly spring-
drowned in dreary diluted drops-
long- loud- crashes loom literally.

Painted brightly protruding seen purple-
canvas crumbling- creased and crushed,
Rain, rumbles, rancorous...

Ill future idling forever illuminate- 

To view the world is a grey brackdrop,
Lined with reds- greys- 
with a hint of drizzle.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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