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Field of Wildflowers

Field of wildflowers sway Being moved by the soft wind Each one being touched

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/31/2009 8:40:00 AM
A beautiful Haiku, Sara. It has the feel of the traditional Zen Haiku. Thank you for your comments on my poems. It means a lot to me. Terry
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Date: 7/23/2009 9:24:00 PM
Beautiful imagery Sara in such a short format.The completeness of this work is beautiful. Thank you for your comment on (The Butterfly You Cannot See)-Please remember any perception that you get from a poem that I have written and you benefit positively from it .....I have done my job as a writer and poetry is perceived by many in so many different ways that is what makes poetry so beautifally awesome. With Love, Lucinda
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Date: 7/23/2009 9:42:00 AM
Nice Haiku. Very touching, Bill
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Date: 7/21/2009 8:07:00 PM
Each flower touching the other reminds us that we all have an impact on those around us. Lovely haiku, Sara! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/20/2009 11:01:00 PM
All of God's different parts moving in harmony, as one, did you ever think of the beauty of nature in that way? Love, Moses!
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Date: 7/20/2009 12:42:00 PM
thanks for reading larvae, it was a challenge to write
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Date: 7/20/2009 11:59:00 AM
aww sweet, so beautiful, thanks for your kind comments God bless you
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Date: 7/20/2009 7:48:00 AM
Delightful, serene, and beautiful!!
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Date: 7/20/2009 4:54:00 AM
just like u touch me......! a touching Haiku!
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