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Fiddle-Faddle Footle

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I haven’t written a fiddle-faddle footle in a while. Here goes: flotsam bought some floating doting for miles exiles flash scenes… careens ah trees… no…bees! coasting ghosting swirling whirling fish fly oh my up creek looks bleak fiddle… diddle faddle… straddle fiddle twiddle faddle - paddle? big scream no dream jump ship don’t slip soft land life’s grand my feet take seat debris past me… i sleep dream deep 3/15/2022

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/17/2022 6:29:00 AM

Brilliant and full of rhymes.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/17/2022 11:50:00 AM

Thank you, Victor! I had fun with this one! :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/16/2022 8:06:00 PM

Fi, fie, fo, fum: I smell a Rodrigues fiddle-faddle-footle come... :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/17/2022 5:56:00 AM

LOL…

Jack Ellison

Date: 3/16/2022 1:52:00 PM

flotsam bought some floating doting LOVE IT dear Kim XOX

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/16/2022 6:36:00 PM

Thank you, Jack! :)

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/16/2022 6:34:00 AM

Great footle, indeed. Congratulations!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/16/2022 1:22:00 PM

Thank you, Christuraj!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/16/2022 5:28:00 AM

Clever pairing--fun-rhythm!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/16/2022 1:20:00 PM

Thank you!

Valsa George

Date: 3/16/2022 1:10:00 AM

Such lovely alliterative footles . I feel you are always good at them ! Beautifully penned !

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/16/2022 5:13:00 AM

Thank you, Valsa! :)

Jcb Brul

Date: 3/15/2022 9:40:00 PM

Oh, what an entertaining sets of footles! Nicely penned!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/16/2022 5:13:00 AM

Thank you, JCB

Debra L Brown

Date: 3/15/2022 4:11:00 PM

Kim, this was fun, enjoyed, Blessings ~ Debra

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/15/2022 6:39:00 PM

Thank you, Debra!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/15/2022 2:06:00 PM

Lol, you write one, you cant stop, great string of footles Kim. Tom

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/15/2022 6:38:00 PM

Thanks so much! I had fun!

Jeff Kyser

Date: 3/15/2022 2:00:00 PM

There's an old Dr. Seuss rhyme that is fun to listen to, involving "Tweedle beetle paddle puddle battle bottle muddle", part of the Fox in Sock book. I think he knew about footle poems before any of us!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/15/2022 6:38:00 PM

LOL…thanks!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/15/2022 1:18:00 PM

very cute and original. So what does it mean to write a fiddle faddle footle, just to use the words fiddle faddle?

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/15/2022 1:43:00 PM

It is just me being silly! If anyone wants to follow suit…lol

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/15/2022 12:02:00 PM

Anyone who likes rhymes has to love this part " fiddle… diddle faddle… straddle fiddle twiddle faddle - paddle?"

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/15/2022 12:37:00 PM

Thanks! It was all downstream…lol