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Seven-Ten

I invented this form and call it (Seven-Ten), (meant to be centered). There should be a distinctive look. A non rhythm, twenty two line blank verse poem with (190 Syllables) with the following count -7 7 10 10 10 7 7 10 10 10 7 7 10 10 10 7 7 10 10 10 7 7                                    

I'm not looking for answers; answers are not hard to find, I seem to trip over them all the time! They sometimes, conveniently overlap, and it's difficult to tell them apart. I prefer hunting questions, they're harder to ferret out. Questions are never found lying around; they are questioning answers all the time, and get deceptive answers quite nervous. Each question's a treasure hunt, searching for one more question. If you are finding answers, that's okay, I suppose that one or two might be true, Answers are oft designed and crafted well, but when instructed to stick to the question asked; few do! Is it that questions are not as precise, therefore, no answer is a perfect fit, or is it that go-to answers can't stretch? When tasked with asking questions, question everything you're taught!

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Date: 2/23/2018 12:17:00 PM
Nice! Very clever. Has to use my brain a bit. Really enjoyed it!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/23/2018 12:25:00 PM
Thanks Anna, your comments always make my day my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/21/2018 10:25:00 PM
What a clever poem! And, it's so true. It reminds me of politicians, some who attempt to dodge the question by giving the most vague answer they can think of. So, then a reporter must ask the right question so as to steer the politician in a manner to where he is almost forced to stick to the point/question. Well, that's my take on this poem. Anyway, I like it. :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/22/2018 11:00:00 AM
Thanks so much Carole, you have a good grasp on where this poem is heading my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/21/2018 6:48:00 PM
Bravo, Emile. Great concept for your poem... I love your line "Each question's a treasure hunt"
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/22/2018 11:00:00 AM
Thank you Line, your comments are a high point of my day my friend, Emile.

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