Fever

I puffed out a soft cold cloud
In these long chambered empty rooms
As my hand held washcloth to brow 
Over me, your sickness looms
Hot breath toasted my fingers
Now heaving up dead fireflies
The anger still lingers
My fever induced by your lies
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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July 31, 2014 at 8:49 PM
Nice twist.
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