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the inspiration for this poem: Van Gogh’s “Autumn House Festive” 

FESTIVE AUTUMN HOUSE

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the house leans into its own firelight~ a fevered yellow against the wine-dark trees. roof tiles curl like burnt paper edges, while the sky bruises purple behind it. two windows gape, empty as hunger. a path ruts the earth, leading nowhere. the chimney exhales a thin ghost of smoke, though no one has lived here for years. still, the whole scene pulses~ not memory, but insistence: a house not remembering warmth, but demanding it.
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Gauthier Avatar
December 6, 2025 at 5:37 PM
Beautifully expressed ~ particularly love the first two stanzas ~
Toney Avatar
December 1, 2025 at 9:48 PM
Love the imagery, Sara!
George Avatar
November 28, 2025 at 2:34 AM
Rather spooky.... ! Though no one has lived there in the house for years, there is still smoke exhaled by the chimney. Great images andi a beautiful poem, dear Sara. I am curious. Is it s haunted house?
Hind Avatar
November 27, 2025 at 3:49 PM
Captivating!!
Krauss Avatar
November 27, 2025 at 9:10 AM
I loved reading your poem. Great job. I loved the imagery in your poem. Thank you so much for writing and sharing.
Poet Avatar
November 27, 2025 at 7:05 AM
Impressively layered metaphors in a beautifully written poem. You have excellent visuals as well. Your poetry is quite lyrical.
DiMino Avatar
November 27, 2025 at 5:42 AM
Objects do have memories...my very old violin often sings notes of beauty I am incapable of playing...I am amazed! Grateful to have been allowed to play my small part. Your house is one of family I am certain. Have a very blessed Thanksgiving my friend!
Buhagiar Avatar
November 27, 2025 at 5:34 AM
Your poem pulses from top to bottom. I want to let you know that your imagery is to be lauded.
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