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Festering Wound

It was past midnight The moon, a sphere of luminosity! But she saw the frozen grimace of death And the nocturnal bats in gyrating motion Meteors of shame and repugnance Flashed past her darkened sky, Cockroaches scurried in her brain, All the nerves taut and about to break Her heart bleeding in silence And her body burning, burning Agony once subsided, surged back Stronger than ever before The cut once healed now Has turned into a festering wound Unable to bear the pain anymore Finding no water to wash away her guilt, With no contrition enough to ease The twinge of her conscience, She drew out a piece of paper From her locked up cupboard Which she would never open again And hastily scribbled something Without qualms Without frills Never waiting for another day Of impotent remorse, She set out to a destination unknown Where Past, Present and Future Merge and coalesce Into The muted whispers of stillness
Placed First March 4, 2022 “Pick-a-Title Vol. 29” Poetry Contest Sponsored by Edward Ibeh

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Date: 3/30/2022 8:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful/powerful~~story/write. Have a blessed day writing away.......................
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Valsa George
Date: 3/31/2022 1:29:00 AM
Thanks a lot Paula ..... ! Indeed it is a sad life story , not fictional .....
Date: 3/28/2022 2:09:00 AM
Excellent emotions here congratulations on your win.
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Date: 3/29/2022 6:26:00 AM
Thank you so much Terry for your kind visit and congratulations !
Date: 3/27/2022 11:00:00 PM
"Cockroaches scurried in her brain" - terrific image. melancholic and gloomy scenes beautifully depicted. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/29/2022 6:25:00 AM
Your poems I admire so much Chris ! This appreciation from you is gratefully received !
Date: 3/27/2022 11:26:00 AM
Such an inspirational outstanding poem, you really excelled as expected in this writing, Valsa . Congratulations on your well deserved win. Best regards
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Date: 3/29/2022 6:24:00 AM
Thank you dear friend for your Congratulations !
Date: 3/27/2022 10:23:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest with this spectacular poem, Valsa:-) Lasaad said it all below!
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Date: 3/27/2022 8:05:00 PM
Thank you so much Edward ! I feel honored and humbled !
Date: 3/7/2022 2:02:00 AM
Valsa, your highly talented writing shines through in your choice of appropriate words to paint a dramatic picture of this profound topic. You've written another fantastic piece, as you always do. Another person's experience is pierced by a powerfully felt poignancy.
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Date: 3/29/2022 6:23:00 AM
As I knew the person myself and had known her story, it was easy to write ! As ever, you have showered so much of kindness on me, Lasaad. Your words sound delicious !
Date: 3/5/2022 11:10:00 PM
I have no words. A fav for me.
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Valsa George
Date: 3/29/2022 6:20:00 AM
Feel so honored Jez ! Thanks a lot !
Date: 3/5/2022 7:23:00 PM
Wow! That's all I have to say. ~ Moon-gazer
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Valsa George
Date: 3/29/2022 6:19:00 AM
Thank you so much for your :"Wow', Gershon !
Date: 3/5/2022 10:22:00 AM
Ah, if we could but see ourselves as others see us! Good luck in the contest! Aloha!
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Date: 3/29/2022 6:18:00 AM
Quite true ! But we have only a partial vision ! Sometimes, totally blind too ! Thanks a lot Rico
Date: 3/5/2022 4:51:00 AM
Excellent write as always my friend. Your gifted pen shines in well chosen words to paint this poignant theme, Valsa.
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Date: 3/29/2022 6:16:00 AM
This from you is received with great delight ! Thanks a lot dear poet friend !
Date: 3/5/2022 4:41:00 AM
Valsa, your poems amaze me with brilliant vocabulary and depth of feelings. This is another example of your mastery in creating a soul-searching piece. Love and best wishes ~ Mala
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Date: 3/29/2022 5:58:00 AM
I could do it with depth of feeling as I knew her. She lived within reachable distance and she had a moving history ! Thanks a Lot Mala for your lovely comment and appreciation !
Date: 3/5/2022 2:50:00 AM
A well constructed poem, lovely vocabulary and imagery.
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Date: 3/29/2022 5:55:00 AM
But a sad one.... Thanks a lot Victor !
Date: 3/5/2022 12:52:00 AM
It takes courage to leave the Past which will never matter, & seek that Destination where time-tenses melt into Spacetime, God's time, without mass & weights. Thought provoking; gr8 contribution as always Sister in Christ
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Date: 3/29/2022 5:54:00 AM
She lacked courage ! That was her tragedy ! Thanks a lot Anil
Date: 3/4/2022 11:05:00 PM
Deeply felt poignancy that traverses another's life, is being felt and realized that such an advent idles any attempt to remedy as being futile at best. Wonderous execution, diction outstanding, exemplar theme, my best wishes, Valsa, Aloha~William
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Date: 3/29/2022 5:50:00 AM
Thank you so much William . This comment from you I deem as an honor. A real story. She was beautiful and belonged to a well to do family. But her husband was a drunkard. He used to bring his friends to the house, sit very late and have their drinking spree. In course of time she started an affair with one of them. In a drunken bout, she and her friend had a physical relationship with her consent. Somehow later she felt sorry for her action. But under threat, she had to yield again. This began to tell upon her psyche and she fell into self reproach and depression. One day she left her home and till date, nothing is known of her.

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