Fertility Celebrations Bloodied

It was dusk and eerie, rain dripped from 
Leaves that rustled in the trees 
Of the nearby woods, each shadow cast
A reminder that danger lurked about!
A shrill scream cut through the darkness,
Bringing with it fear and dread, 
A certain warning, that murder was the mood!

A fox sneaked back into its hole, 
As a snake slithered in after it and the
Rain turned into a torrential downfall
Lightening was the only form of light
In this frightening scenario, the thunder
Boomed forth, as the storm came nearer
And nearer, until another scream was heard!

The storm abated and stopped and the
Moon lit up the sky as did the many stars!
It was the 20th March, and the Pagans were 
Celebrating the Spring Equinox, so they
Danced around a fire, reason, ritual fertility rites
The vampires were also aware of this festival,
Hiding, Drooling, and fiercely hungry !

Their sharp dirty teeth glinting in the midnight
Moonlight, their filthy rags already soaked 
In blood as they had snacked on latecomers.
The pagans unaware of their pending plight
Screeched and screamed, as the vampires
Fell upon them chaos ruled, as they drained
Their blood, leaving them dead, and shriveled.

Overfed, they forgot that dawn was nigh, 
The sun now showing, the vampires scampered 
Away, like cockroaches hiding their ugly bloody faces 
From the sudden sunlight engulfing them, but their greedy 
Feast resulted in karma for these haunting, daunting
Monsters, then came the werewolves and finished off the
Skeletal Leftovers!  Don’t visit the woods on the 1st May!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Callus Avatar
December 12, 2020 at 8:25 AM
After reading this excellent narration, and listening to your advice, I will certainly refrain from taking any risks on 1st May, Jenny :) ~ Warm regards & Hugs // paul
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December 1, 2020 at 2:59 PM
G’day Jennifer … it’s great when a storyteller allows the imagination to run wild as you have in this verse Jennifer. A little bit scary indeed - thanks Jennifer - Lindsay
Watt Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 11:37 PM
Delightful storytelling poem, my dear Jenn, though darker (and bloodier) than your usual fare! You painted quite the ghastly picture that will make me think twice about going into the woods at midnight, that day or any day! I do enjoy your writing. Warm wishes to you ~ John
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November 27, 2020 at 8:24 AM
I enjoy you enjoying my poems, I wanted to write something scary, guess it worked out as I hoped, no, definitely no woods, or forests for us soupers. Thanks John, always a brilliant comment. Warm wishes to you also my friend. Hugs, Jennifer.
Andresen Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 12:07 PM
- Thanks for the warning ... I'm going to stay far away from this forest ... a scary and bloody poem, Jenny - Great written with lively creativity :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Proxenos Avatar
November 27, 2020 at 8:30 AM
I normally don't write this style of poetry but for a change had to prove to myself that I could, thanks for a great comment sis. Hugs Jennifer.
Ashley Avatar
November 22, 2020 at 8:44 PM
My wonderful friend, your intriguing poem is rich in vivid monstrous imagery and dark emotions! Vampires ruin everything! Werewolves too! Great storytelling spills from your gifted pen, Jennifer. Warmest wishes and hugs, dear poetess.. ~Susan
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November 27, 2020 at 9:18 AM
Susan my dear sister, your comments are always breathtaking. I think I am going to collect them and keep them, in a file of there own - my gifted pend has been inspired by many on soup including you Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
Dietrich Avatar
November 22, 2020 at 6:13 PM
wow, what a dark tale this was, and not only vampires. I love how you ended it with the werewolves finishing everything off!!
Proxenos Avatar
November 27, 2020 at 9:02 AM
We see so much on TV dear Andrea, that our inspiration is from information from books, TV, series etc. I think Vampires and werewolves belong together. Thank you for an awesome comment my friend, Hugs and blessings. Jennifer.
Buhagiar Avatar
November 22, 2020 at 12:00 PM
Dark poem reminding me of Halloween. Great emotions. ~~
Proxenos Avatar
November 27, 2020 at 9:04 AM
Indeed dear Victor, thanks for a lovely comment, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
One Avatar
November 21, 2020 at 11:52 AM
Real dark imagery in your words which created a vivid story... Great storytelling my friend.
Proxenos Avatar
November 27, 2020 at 9:09 AM
Thank Silent One, I surprised myself when it was finished and i read it, and I hadn't even saved it, something like the poem I forgot to enter into your contest. I love your comment, thank-you. hugs and blessings, Jennifer
Michael Avatar
November 21, 2020 at 3:56 AM
The 1st of May, be a reminder...the vampires are draining us every day...we haven't left the jungle yet... I like the way you told it...
Proxenos Avatar
November 27, 2020 at 9:15 AM
Thank-you Arturo, my blessed friend, my kind and genuine friend. Thank-you for a lovely comment - hope you enjoy the weekend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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November 21, 2020 at 3:32 AM
Wow, Jennifer,... this is horrific and so gruesome! You might write a horror novel with scenes so vividly grim. Would have been a perfect Halloween entry to some contest :) You're writing is vicious here. God bless you... Gina
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November 27, 2020 at 9:22 AM
Strange you should mention a book - I am working on an anthology book, but its going to take a while. A very descriptive comment, thank you my friend. Keep safe. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
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