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Felipe The Fish

I once heard of a young fish named, Felipe Who floated up to consider a leap His friends did shout For him to jump out But he was afraid the air was too deep

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/19/2014 11:57:00 PM
Really maximized this one: short and sweet. Congratulations.
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Date: 4/4/2014 10:17:00 PM
Loved this one, gave me a smile when I needed it!
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Date: 3/31/2014 10:34:00 PM
DAVID, NICE SEEING YOU ON ANDREA'S WINNING LIST... Congratulations!!! LUV*LINDA
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Date: 3/31/2014 5:49:00 PM
Ha! Ha! Congrats on your win, David! Love, Kim
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Date: 3/31/2014 3:13:00 AM
congrats .....Seren
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Date: 3/30/2014 12:10:00 PM
Very clever. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/30/2014 6:11:00 AM
It's Sunday and happy to enjoy the fun and humor. Congrats on the win, david
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Date: 3/29/2014 9:42:00 PM
i LOVE the ending of this one. VERY clever!!! Congrats in my contest. soupmail for you.
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Date: 3/26/2014 8:20:00 PM
haha...I enjoyed this clever write
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Date: 3/26/2014 7:43:00 PM
This is great David...Tim
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