Felipe the Fish

I once heard of a young fish named, Felipe
Who floated up to consider a leap
His friends did shout
For him to jump out
But he was afraid the air was too deep
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Peterson Avatar
April 19, 2014 at 11:57 PM
Really maximized this one: short and sweet. Congratulations.
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April 4, 2014 at 10:17 PM
Loved this one, gave me a smile when I needed it!
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March 31, 2014 at 10:34 PM
DAVID, NICE SEEING YOU ON ANDREA'S WINNING LIST... Congratulations!!! LUV*LINDA
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March 31, 2014 at 5:49 PM
Ha! Ha! Congrats on your win, David! Love, Kim
Roberts Avatar
March 31, 2014 at 3:13 AM
congrats .....Seren
Johnson Avatar
March 30, 2014 at 12:10 PM
Very clever. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Mehta Avatar
March 30, 2014 at 6:11 AM
It's Sunday and happy to enjoy the fun and humor. Congrats on the win, david
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March 29, 2014 at 9:42 PM
i LOVE the ending of this one. VERY clever!!! Congrats in my contest. soupmail for you.
May Avatar
March 26, 2014 at 8:20 PM
haha...I enjoyed this clever write
Smith Avatar
March 26, 2014 at 7:43 PM
This is great David...Tim
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