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Feline Football Haiku

Feline Football- English Haiku Cat on all fours crouched. Grape football hit with swift paw. Punt, calico wins! October 8, 2019 English Haiku 5 syllables-line 1 7 syllables-line 2 5 syllables-line 3

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Date: 10/31/2019 5:49:00 PM
Love it, love it, love it. In a haiku form, you created the image in my mind of a cat chasing grape. TOUCHDOWN! Perhaps I have failed to mention that I am a fan of football as well as cats. :)
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/31/2019 7:23:00 PM
Good for you, Janet. She is declawed, not by me. So has trouble grasping toys. Never guesses a grape woukd make her so happy! Me? Hockey, next life...want to be a goalie, or anyone that loves fighting on ice.)). Heart of a Zamboni driver,. Panagiota
Date: 10/10/2019 12:37:00 AM
Hi Panagiota, cute and fun - Feline Football - it's when they catch a mouse that I walk away. Hugs, Jenny.
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Date: 10/11/2019 7:19:00 AM
NEVER SAW THAT, BUT MICE ARE THE PERFECT FOOD FOR THEM.
Date: 10/10/2019 12:00:00 AM
Cute as can be. Just delicious! ~ Masculine cat
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/11/2019 7:17:00 AM
LOL PUNTER IS FEMALE
Date: 10/9/2019 1:33:00 PM
I can see how much you enjoy your cat!
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Date: 10/9/2019 1:41:00 PM
Indeedy do. And she is gorgeous and then some. Love Panagiota
Date: 10/9/2019 1:06:00 PM
That was cute. Fun to read my friend.
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Date: 10/9/2019 1:36:00 PM
Greetings, Chris! I struggled over posting this haiku, The cat is marvelous with a grape. I adopted her and OMG, she was declawed. She has so many toys she cannot use, grapes and rings from milk bottles? She loves.. The Punter and PanagiotA
Date: 10/9/2019 12:31:00 PM
- Grape football sounds fun, Panagiota :) - Great haiku ... sweet cat :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/9/2019 1:27:00 PM
Hey Anne Lise. Glad you enjoyed. Bless you for a dear comment. The only great poets here do comment, the rest use us like an outdoor mat. To clean off their feet and move on. I hate seeing no replies. After all a poet put their heart in it. Sheesh,even a T.Y. Would do. Maybe I am too soft hearted! Love, Panagiota

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