Feline

door opens moon drowsy a shadow slips into bed furry darkness swells

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/29/2015 2:10:00 PM

cute one. My kitty is black and she is truly a dark one in the night.

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 1/29/2015 8:27:00 AM

Amazing imagery! Love the second line! Enjoyable read. / M

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 1/28/2015 7:34:00 PM

love how this drew for me excellent pen dear friend

Paul Callus

Date: 1/28/2015 4:18:00 PM

Very lovely and descriptive, Rajat; a great write for cat lovers! #7 // paul

Kp Nunez

Date: 1/28/2015 11:45:00 AM

Rajat, the haiku master. I can almost see it, moonlight enters your room, a graceful shadow moves with stealth, bed dips with its weight, furry company for sleep...Lovely picture...lovely haiku. Warm smiles from the land of thousand isles...Kim :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/28/2015 8:07:00 AM

Fantastic, my friend, Rajat! Just fantastic!

Len Gasun

Date: 1/28/2015 8:04:00 AM

An awesome haiku describing what feline does sometimes my dear fried Rajat. Great job my very dear friend. I loved and enjoyed so much your poem! Thank you so much for sharing! Thanks a lot as well for your precious time reading my work and your lovely comments. More blessings! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/27/2015 10:48:00 AM

Sometimes those pets can scare us when they jump in the bed unexpectedly..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for stopping by..I am dachshund sitting today...Sara