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Feelings On Paper

I have a propensity to write my feelings on paper. My voice is silent orally. My feelings locked down When they are not oozing out of my eyes and cheeks. I like to think they are put away safely in a Velvet lined jewel-encrusted crypt, but they are not. So I let them out onto a blank page with blue lines And a pink stripe running down the side to show Me where to start and stop which makes me laugh. For I am always writing around the corners of a page Over and under all the lines. I have a propensity to do that too. I have an inkling that my feelings will be safer on Paper, than down deep in that velvet crypt, for Releasing them releases me. And they don’t stay down long anyway, Oozing out of my eyes and cheeks Even when I am silent.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 8/20/2019 1:31:00 AM
Your writes are so differently Caren, I enjoy them and understand where you are coming from - especially this one - 'my feelings will be safer on paper, than down deep in that velvet crypt, for releasing them releases me' - well penned Caren. Hugs, Jennifer. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/20/2019 9:44:00 AM
Thank you Jennifer. My writes are different because I talk better on a page than I do with my voice.
Date: 8/19/2019 8:56:00 AM
Even when silent... Oh yes, my friend. Never be silent for your words are gold to be treasured, sent around the world twice on little birds that fly fast as lightening. Hugs. A lovely write indeed... Ann
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/19/2019 2:34:00 PM
I can be as silent as I want but my feelings are oozing out of every pore.
Date: 8/18/2019 5:54:00 PM
Nice piece. Interesting take on the creative process. Enjoyed immensely.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/19/2019 6:39:00 AM
Thank you Frank. I appreciate it.
Date: 8/18/2019 11:18:00 AM
That is a blessing...
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/19/2019 6:39:00 AM
It truly is. And I realize it too.
Date: 8/18/2019 9:31:00 AM
Great one Caren! Keep up the writing :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/19/2019 6:39:00 AM
Thank you Heidi. I will because I cannot do otherwise.
Date: 8/18/2019 7:29:00 AM
Excellent exploration of the need to write.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/19/2019 6:39:00 AM
Thank you Eric. It helps me to keep these feelings down on a page.

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