Douglas Pederson Poet Free verse

Feeling the Weather

drops of rain roll down my chin
what would one expect if they are under the weather
under the weather implies ill feeling  or out of sorts
but stepping out of the rain does not eliminate the blahs.

so you’re under the weather and not feeling well
get out of the rain and hope it will clear
when feeling better the rain may have ended
patience can change your feelings and the weather

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David Mchattie April 26, 2019 at 11:13 PM I always think of the Calvin and Hobbes cartoon where he is standing in the rain waiting for the school bus with such a look of complete and utter contempt. Have a great day my friend.