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Feeling Down

Oh, I hate this feeling, feeling down. Usurped, today I am the clown. That noxious program runs amuck, And in the quagmire, I am stuck. It’s an itch that can’t be found, I scratch the surface all around. Fingers grope in soggy head, To ascertain what can be read. Loads of shadows in my space, Overcrowd this tender place. Soggy footprints on my ground, That trampled all my feeling down. Of course I know it’s in my head, Noxious program as I said. Perhaps if I just shut it down, Then reboot, regain my crown?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/30/2009 5:30:00 AM
great poem, I like the computer/brain part!! I have the slow-suckin mud brain today.
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Date: 12/29/2009 9:57:00 AM
I thank you for writing and sharing your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup David. I offer you warm greeting for the New Year with best wishes to you on your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/28/2009 10:35:00 AM
Know this feeling all to well- good write
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