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Where Blue sky Meets vigor Of azure lake, Golden light frolics upon amber waves While little girl sits, conversing with duck; Endearingly Whispering: Feel my Love. August 16, 2020 Double Tetractys Poetry Contest Sponsor: Eve Roper Photo #1

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/6/2021 3:08:00 PM

I thought that I had commented on this one but I don't see my comment. I enjoyed reading your winner. Congrats. Sara

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/1/2021 11:52:00 AM

Congratulation on your win. A cute write and picture. Wish I was with her feeding the ducks. Enjoy your win. "Happy New Year" Have a great 2021. Today, have joy/blessings....................

Akkina Downing

Date: 11/5/2020 9:30:00 PM

I thought I’d read one more before I turn my lights out. And this one sweet and adorable :)

Angela Crabtree

Date: 10/4/2020 5:18:00 PM

Beautifully written, Vijay. I love the part about the little girl conversing with the duck. :) Peace, Angie

Judy Ball

Date: 8/24/2020 1:59:00 PM

Oh this is so very sweet. Love it and the lovely picture which fits so well.A fave for me. God Bless, JB

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/25/2020 4:56:00 AM

So very kind of you--many thanks Judy. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.

Arturo Michael

Date: 8/23/2020 5:02:00 PM

Lovely imagery and message here...The wonders of a CHILD

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/24/2020 12:56:00 PM

Much appreciate--many thanks, Arturo.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 8/22/2020 9:16:00 PM

You have caught the serene innocence of this so movingly, best wishes for the contest-

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/23/2020 1:15:00 PM

Thank you Michelle.

Silent One

Date: 8/19/2020 1:12:00 PM

I don't believe I have ever done this form before .. Even with such a short form, you still created vivid imagery... I think this one will do well my friend..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/20/2020 4:37:00 AM

Much appreciate my friend--many thanks, Silent One.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/19/2020 4:26:00 AM

I do feel it when I look at that photo and read your tender words Vijay, beautiful poem that makes me smile and starts my morning right, thank you, have a blessed day my friend.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/19/2020 4:40:00 AM

Thank you my friend--much appreciate, Vienna.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/19/2020 12:46:00 AM

This is beautiful, Vijay, a sure winner for me:)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/19/2020 4:39:00 AM

Much appreciate Jo--many thanks.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/18/2020 4:37:00 PM

a very charming one. I see this duck picture is very popular with the poets here!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/19/2020 4:39:00 AM

Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.

Paul Callus

Date: 8/18/2020 7:33:00 AM

A most delightful Tetractys, Vijay. Your imagery as usual is worthy of note. I have no doubt Eve will love this one. Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/18/2020 3:19:00 PM

Much appreciate Paul--many thanks for your kind remarks.

V. Deepa

Date: 8/18/2020 2:53:00 AM

Hello Vijay sir, "Golden light frolics upon amber waves"~ Enjoyed your cute poem sir:-) Glad we chose same photo.But, entirely differing in our concepts:-) Your's is the best.Loved it.:-)My best wishes for your win..!! Have a great day.Warmest regards sent to you..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/18/2020 5:36:00 AM

You are so very kind, Deepa. And you are very modest--I read your poem--it is quite lovely as I said in my comments. Much appreciate. Many thanks.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 8/17/2020 2:12:00 PM

Love is soft and tender. Your thoughts wrap around this painting with elegance and grace. This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. I love what you have created my dear friend. My heart is smiling. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/18/2020 5:30:00 AM

Thank you my dear friend--your visit always makes my day--a joy to read your comments. Much appreciate, Brandy.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/17/2020 6:04:00 AM

Vijay, this is so beautiful and touching! Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/17/2020 11:46:00 AM

Thank you Janice--much appreciate.