Vijay Pandit Poet Tetractys

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Feel My Love

Where
Blue sky
Meets vigor
Of azure lake,
Golden light frolics upon amber waves
While little girl sits, conversing with duck;
Endearingly
Whispering:
Feel my
Love.

August 16, 2020
Double Tetractys Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Eve Roper
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Sara Kendrick January 6, 2021 at 3:08 PM I thought that I had commented on this one but I don't see my comment. I enjoyed reading your winner. Congrats. Sara

Paula Goldsmith January 1, 2021 at 11:52 AM Congratulation on your win. A cute write and picture. Wish I was with her feeding the ducks. Enjoy your win. "Happy New Year" Have a great 2021. Today, have joy/blessings....................

Akkina Downing November 5, 2020 at 9:30 PM I thought I’d read one more before I turn my lights out. And this one sweet and adorable :)

Angela Crabtree October 4, 2020 at 5:18 PM Beautifully written, Vijay. I love the part about the little girl conversing with the duck. :) Peace, Angie

Judy Ball August 24, 2020 at 1:59 PM Oh this is so very sweet. Love it and the lovely picture which fits so well.A fave for me. God Bless, JB Vijay Pandit August 25, 2020 at 4:56 AM So very kind of you--many thanks Judy. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.

Arturo Michael August 23, 2020 at 5:02 PM Lovely imagery and message here...The wonders of a CHILD Vijay Pandit August 24, 2020 at 12:56 PM Much appreciate--many thanks, Arturo.

Michelle Faulkner August 22, 2020 at 9:16 PM You have caught the serene innocence of this so movingly, best wishes for the contest- Vijay Pandit August 23, 2020 at 1:15 PM Thank you Michelle.

Silent One August 19, 2020 at 1:12 PM I don't believe I have ever done this form before .. Even with such a short form, you still created vivid imagery... I think this one will do well my friend.. Vijay Pandit August 20, 2020 at 4:37 AM Much appreciate my friend--many thanks, Silent One.

Mystic Rose Rose August 19, 2020 at 4:26 AM I do feel it when I look at that photo and read your tender words Vijay, beautiful poem that makes me smile and starts my morning right, thank you, have a blessed day my friend. Vijay Pandit August 19, 2020 at 4:40 AM Thank you my friend--much appreciate, Vienna.

Joanna Daniel August 19, 2020 at 12:46 AM This is beautiful, Vijay, a sure winner for me:) Vijay Pandit August 19, 2020 at 4:39 AM Much appreciate Jo--many thanks.

Andrea Dietrich August 18, 2020 at 4:37 PM a very charming one. I see this duck picture is very popular with the poets here! Vijay Pandit August 19, 2020 at 4:39 AM Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.

Paul Callus August 18, 2020 at 7:33 AM A most delightful Tetractys, Vijay. Your imagery as usual is worthy of note. I have no doubt Eve will love this one. Regards // paul Vijay Pandit August 18, 2020 at 3:19 PM Much appreciate Paul--many thanks for your kind remarks.

V. Deepa August 18, 2020 at 2:53 AM Hello Vijay sir, "Golden light frolics upon amber waves"~ Enjoyed your cute poem sir:-) Glad we chose same photo.But, entirely differing in our concepts:-) Your's is the best.Loved it.:-)My best wishes for your win..!! Have a great day.Warmest regards sent to you.. Vijay Pandit August 18, 2020 at 5:36 AM You are so very kind, Deepa. And you are very modest--I read your poem--it is quite lovely as I said in my comments. Much appreciate. Many thanks.

Brandy Nicole August 17, 2020 at 2:12 PM Love is soft and tender. Your thoughts wrap around this painting with elegance and grace. This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. I love what you have created my dear friend. My heart is smiling. :) Brandy Vijay Pandit August 18, 2020 at 5:30 AM Thank you my dear friend--your visit always makes my day--a joy to read your comments. Much appreciate, Brandy.

Janice Canerdy August 17, 2020 at 6:04 AM Vijay, this is so beautiful and touching! Janice Vijay Pandit August 17, 2020 at 11:46 AM Thank you Janice--much appreciate.

Supraja Kannan August 17, 2020 at 5:58 AM Great imagery! Good luck in the contest. Vijay Pandit August 17, 2020 at 11:46 AM Much appreciate Supraja--many thanks.

John Hamilton August 16, 2020 at 3:33 PM This is so adorable, a cute and cuddly write, it must be a challenge with the forced syllable count, but you pulled it off. Vijay Pandit August 17, 2020 at 11:45 AM Thank you John--much appreciate your kind remarks.

Kim Rodrigues August 16, 2020 at 9:54 AM Very pretty, my friend! So glad to see a poem done in brevity by you. Love it! Vijay Pandit August 17, 2020 at 11:45 AM Much appreciate Kim--thank you myfriend.

Lawrence Sharp August 16, 2020 at 9:36 AM Very delicate, Vijay, great write. Vijay Pandit August 17, 2020 at 11:44 AM Thank you my friend--much appreciate, Lawrence.

Heidi Sands August 16, 2020 at 9:22 AM Beautiful and sweet Vijay. Very nice :) Vijay Pandit August 17, 2020 at 11:44 AM Much appreciate Heidi--many thanks as always.

Jeanne Mcgee August 16, 2020 at 8:34 AM Ahhh, cute and cuddly meets beautiful nature. Love it Vijay. Vijay Pandit August 17, 2020 at 11:43 AM Thank you Jeanne--much appreciate.