Feeding the Ducklings


I still remember
when I was a little girl
mom and dad loving picnics
we liked this one place
with lots of old shady trees
and a wooden water pier

the little ducklings
swam right behind mother duck
and they were so sweet to watch
on the very end
of the pier I liked to sit
can I feed them, dad

dad said yes of course
but never feed bread my dear
he gave me some nice green grapes
some chopped old lettuce
even some grated carrots
oh, I ate some too

why dad, why not bread
he told me bread would kill them
water fowl cannot digest
bread- feed them good food
dad knew a lot about nature
and feeding wee ducklings too

I loved how they came
paddling fast to get a treat
mother duck drifted watching
then- watermelon
even I had some of that
I was just a small girl then

a memory now
of an afternoon feeding
precious ducklings from the pier
of my mom and dad
and that special place we loved
I still go- to feed ducklings

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May 5, 2016

Poetry/Choka/Feeding the Ducklings
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For the contest, Feeding the Ducklings,
sponsor, Eve Roper

Third Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A  Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 5:50 PM
BROKEN, congratulations on your FEEDING THE DUCKY'S win. LUV **SKAT**
Rycroft Avatar
June 7, 2016 at 9:27 AM
well done congrats on a very good poem
Selfa Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 6:28 AM
What an amazing work Broken Wings! I know you would win! Congratulations and keep on writing! :) -Hans
Callus Avatar
May 31, 2016 at 12:40 PM
Lovely moments that make for cherished childhood memories. Good of you to let us know about not feeding ducks bread. Congratulations on this fine win! Regards // paul
Daniel Avatar
May 31, 2016 at 1:20 AM
Back to congratulate you on your lovely win, Constance:) Well picturised and to know that you still feed ducklings is great:)
Carmack Avatar
May 31, 2016 at 12:11 AM
I love this poem, takes me back to some of my memories of when life was so easy and simple. If I only knew then....... Congrats Constance.
Misra Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 10:46 PM
Nice one, Broken, and congrats on your win. Is it true about not feeding bread to the ducks? I didn't know that. ~karam~
Scars Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 6:43 PM
Broken Wings, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
Haight Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 6:02 PM
Very sweet, Broken Wings! Nice how you worked your own precious memories into being the little girl in the picture. Congrats on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
Roper Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 5:15 PM
Constance, thank you so much for creating a wonderful poem of memories past. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Allison Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 4:45 PM
Oh such lovely memories many congrats Constance:-) hugs jan xx
Godwin Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 10:50 PM
I love your take, making it a treasured memory of childhood, leisure, parents, wildlife, learning, et. al. Such a clear memory is most indicative of a special remembrance to visit as one would a dear friend. Lovely and touching write ... CayCay
Devnath  Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 3:48 PM
Very sweet poem on feeding ducklings. Again i am helpless, A 7. Loved always my lovely friend, bl
Makama Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 11:27 AM
Straight from the heart with a cleanser for the mind. A powerful seven and an absolute wonder.
Horne Avatar
May 10, 2016 at 3:29 PM
awww, how lovely - such precious memories here
Chansarkar Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 9:15 PM
Lovely and nostalgic, thanks BW!
Daniel Avatar
May 6, 2016 at 4:48 AM
I can picturise everything and it looks b e a u t i f u l:) all the best:)
La France Avatar
May 6, 2016 at 6:55 PM
Jo, thanks for visiting with the b e a u t i f u l ~
Raynes Avatar
May 5, 2016 at 7:19 PM
i love those beautiful moments that stick with you. this is beautiful, your friend, Lewis
La France Avatar
May 6, 2016 at 6:55 PM
Lewis, thanks for the beautiful appreciate ~~
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