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Feeding the Ducklings

I still remember when I was a little girl mom and dad loving picnics we liked this one place with lots of old shady trees and a wooden water pier the little ducklings swam right behind mother duck and they were so sweet to watch on the very end of the pier I liked to sit can I feed them, dad dad said yes of course but never feed bread my dear he gave me some nice green grapes some chopped old lettuce even some grated carrots oh, I ate some too why dad, why not bread he told me bread would kill them water fowl cannot digest bread- feed them good food dad knew a lot about nature and feeding wee ducklings too I loved how they came paddling fast to get a treat mother duck drifted watching then- watermelon even I had some of that I was just a small girl then a memory now of an afternoon feeding precious ducklings from the pier of my mom and dad and that special place we loved I still go- to feed ducklings _________________________ May 5, 2016 Poetry/Choka/Feeding the Ducklings Copyright Protected, ID 16-786-882-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Feeding the Ducklings, sponsor, Eve Roper Third Place

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Date: 7/17/2016 5:50:00 PM
BROKEN, congratulations on your FEEDING THE DUCKY'S win. LUV **SKAT**
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Date: 6/7/2016 9:27:00 AM
well done congrats on a very good poem
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Date: 6/1/2016 6:28:00 AM
What an amazing work Broken Wings! I know you would win! Congratulations and keep on writing! :) -Hans
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Date: 5/31/2016 12:40:00 PM
Lovely moments that make for cherished childhood memories. Good of you to let us know about not feeding ducks bread. Congratulations on this fine win! Regards // paul
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Date: 5/31/2016 1:20:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your lovely win, Constance:) Well picturised and to know that you still feed ducklings is great:)
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Date: 5/31/2016 12:11:00 AM
I love this poem, takes me back to some of my memories of when life was so easy and simple. If I only knew then....... Congrats Constance.
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Date: 5/30/2016 10:46:00 PM
Nice one, Broken, and congrats on your win. Is it true about not feeding bread to the ducks? I didn't know that. ~karam~
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Date: 5/30/2016 6:43:00 PM
Broken Wings, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Date: 5/30/2016 6:02:00 PM
Very sweet, Broken Wings! Nice how you worked your own precious memories into being the little girl in the picture. Congrats on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/30/2016 5:15:00 PM
Constance, thank you so much for creating a wonderful poem of memories past. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/30/2016 4:45:00 PM
Oh such lovely memories many congrats Constance:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/28/2016 10:50:00 PM
I love your take, making it a treasured memory of childhood, leisure, parents, wildlife, learning, et. al. Such a clear memory is most indicative of a special remembrance to visit as one would a dear friend. Lovely and touching write ... CayCay
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Date: 5/13/2016 3:48:00 PM
Very sweet poem on feeding ducklings. Again i am helpless, A 7. Loved always my lovely friend, bl
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Date: 5/12/2016 11:27:00 AM
Straight from the heart with a cleanser for the mind. A powerful seven and an absolute wonder.
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Date: 5/10/2016 3:29:00 PM
awww, how lovely - such precious memories here
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Date: 5/9/2016 9:15:00 PM
Lovely and nostalgic, thanks BW!
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Date: 5/6/2016 4:48:00 AM
I can picturise everything and it looks b e a u t i f u l:) all the best:)
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Constance La France
Date: 5/6/2016 6:55:00 PM
Jo, thanks for visiting with the b e a u t i f u l ~
Date: 5/5/2016 7:19:00 PM
i love those beautiful moments that stick with you. this is beautiful, your friend, Lewis
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Constance La France
Date: 5/6/2016 6:55:00 PM
Lewis, thanks for the beautiful appreciate ~~

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