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hummingbird feeder filled to the brim, bird flies in.... barn swallow glides, swoops

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Jan Allison

Date: 7/20/2024 12:27:00 PM

I would love to see hummingbirds for real, this is a charming haiku Sara:-) hugs jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 7/20/2024 1:19:00 PM

They aren't native to the Uk so i guess i just will have to travel to see them one day:-) hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/20/2024 1:02:00 PM

Jan, sorry you have not seen any where you live. Even in areas where they live naturally, they are somewhat elusive because of their speed. Sara K

Valsa George

Date: 7/20/2024 9:33:00 AM

It is so refreshing to see birds coming to eat from the bird feeder. Beautiful haiku and beautiful image.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/20/2024 1:00:00 PM

Thank you, Valsa. Something for me to enjoy while I do something that is not as much fun. Sara K

Paige Hind

Date: 7/19/2024 8:12:00 PM

Nice imagery...like the reference of a swallow

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/20/2024 4:05:00 AM

Yes, Paige, I was wondering if they might collide in the air. Sara K

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/19/2024 11:24:00 AM

Hello Sara Kendrick, the birdfeeder is very busy with birds. they are hungry. Hugs. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/20/2024 10:42:00 AM

Hello Sara, oh good luck with the humming bird's feeder. I hope you can keep up. Hugs. /Darlene/

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/19/2024 2:28:00 PM

Thank you, Darlene. There has been some changes here with there being less flowers in my garden this year so the hummingbirds and other birds have needed my help to supply them with what they need. I hope I have the strength to make some changes to once again have a wide variety of flowers for hummers and butterflies to feed from. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/19/2024 9:58:00 AM

What a fun "feeder" Haiku write. Great Picture... I enjoyed reading this one. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away..................

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/19/2024 11:24:00 AM

Thank you, Paula. Those birds can consume some food in a day's time. Your visits are delightful. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/19/2024 9:56:00 AM

Ooh…suspenseful! Love watching the birds at the feeder. My dad hasn’t filled his lately. I think he’s a bit down…

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/19/2024 11:23:00 AM

Kim, when a person gets older, the heat can be oppressive for them so going outside to fill a bird feeder can be a stressor. Also, the heat can get a person of age down just in itself. Thanks for dropping by. Sara K

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/19/2024 9:55:00 AM

Such delight in each line, Sara! I have a hummingbird feeder outside my office window and I love watching the hummingbirds along with the wrens who try to steal a little snack. Blessings to you and to your birdies!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/19/2024 11:22:00 AM

Thank you, Sam, for dropping by and taking time to comment. I am glad that you enjoy the birds and give them some food also. Sara K

Ink Empress

Date: 7/19/2024 8:09:00 AM

I always enjoy reading your haiku, dear sara, you write such picturesque ones and your pictures are so fitting too for them. I especially love the imagery of bird flying in… and the last line is brilliant. Sending you light alwayz

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/19/2024 11:20:00 AM

IE, I was concerned that there would be a major collision out in the back garden this morning, but they managed to not run into each other. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

Tom Woody

Date: 7/19/2024 7:26:00 AM

Awesome haiku and photo. We have one on front porch but though the feeder keeps getting drained sightings have been rare

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/19/2024 11:18:00 AM

Hard to catch those little marvels of nature because they are so fast. Thanks for the visit and kind review of my work. Sara K