February


Falling snowflakes like delicate lace, and
Every tree is draped in pure white
Beyond my window pane . . .
Relentlessly drop these gifts from God
Utterly beautiful this time of year . . .
And the wind wails like violins, with the
Rhapsody of chirping birds
Yellow, in a snow covered tree

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August 8, 2015

Poetry/Acrostic/February
Copyright Protected, ID 08-698-413-08
All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France 

(My birthday - February 1)

For the Premier contest,  Birthday Month Acrostic
Sponsor, Charlotte Puddifoot, Judged 2015 

Third Place
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Jayasankar Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 5:26 AM
Constance, I love February, because it is my birthday month too... I just loved this poem in beautiful acrostic... Last three lines just awesome. So, we both have something in common... Lol. This will be my fav again. Thanks for these amazing lines. Hugs ~ Ani
La France Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 7:38 AM
Ani, thanks for seeking out an older poem of mine and for the comment and compliment _Constance
Campbell Avatar
August 27, 2015 at 6:14 PM
I love the way your winner poem evoked the feel of pleasant beauty; appreciated the colorful ending. Barbara
Horne Avatar
August 19, 2015 at 2:39 PM
oh, i love this - the only snow I'll experience this year, i expect : )
A. Sharma Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 11:09 PM
Congrats on another wonderful win with this awesome february acrostic my dear broken!
A  Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 2:50 PM
Awesome win.... SKAT
Dietrich Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 10:43 AM
wow, this is so beautiful. Can't believe I am only seeing it no. BIG congrats in the contest with this well deserved win.
Lindsay Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 4:16 AM
Adore the reference to the violin ... well done ;)
Nair Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 8:55 PM
I liked the wind wails like violin part. Congrats.
Lamoureux Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 7:19 PM
My Sweeties Birthday is February 1st as well. Cool! Congratulations Constance.
Ngoma Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 5:10 PM
Hi Broken Wing...very interesting to learn that this time of the year when we're flocking to public pools and the beach - you're building the snowman and putting on skiis for fun in the snow..congrats on prolific win *******(:heers, Tbang
Gibson Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 4:23 PM
This one is stunning; i loved reading it. Congratulations!
Puddifoot Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 4:01 PM
you painted with your pen, constance, this was just like looking at a painting - a beautiful one - i loved how you brought in the brightness of the yellow to contrast with the wintry white in that last line - congrats on your win in my contest :)
Allison Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 3:59 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Broken Wings:-) hugs Jan xx
Nance Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 3:36 PM
-so many beautiful lines, the wind wails like violins, snowflakes like delicate lace, such an awesome write, grats on your win!
Boddie Avatar
August 14, 2015 at 1:41 PM
the Beauty you describe....can only coincide....which I feel is your greatest source of pride....and that is your Beauty from inside.....;)
Poet Avatar
August 13, 2015 at 11:22 AM
Lovely Acrostic here!Enjoyed.
Cwiak Avatar
August 11, 2015 at 5:57 AM
Almost makes me wish I'd been born in February. Great lines! Thanks for the thoughts and your words. Kudos on this one!
Pinet Avatar
August 10, 2015 at 3:40 PM
Hell, I would have given you a seven just for being born in February, but your poem earned those marks on its own merit with good flow and great word choices that brought your thoughts across well. Emile. #7
Sietesantos Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 9:13 PM
What a beautiful, magical piece that sings in tune with a heavenly violin! Exquisite imagery that arises from your gifted pen, my friend! A 7 of course! Pandita
Andresen Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 5:21 AM
- One month with a beautiful lights and sparkling snowflakes - Beautiful written, B.W. - I wish you good luck in the contest - Have a nice Sunday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 1:49 AM
beautiful imagery Broken wings - good luck in the contest:-) hugs janxx7
Johnson Avatar
August 8, 2015 at 8:55 PM
Beautifully composed. Good luck. Love, Joyce
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