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February

Falling snowflakes like delicate lace, and Every tree is draped in pure white Beyond my window pane . . . Relentlessly drop these gifts from God Utterly beautiful this time of year . . . And the wind wails like violins, with the Rhapsody of chirping birds Yellow, in a snow covered tree _______________________ August 8, 2015 Poetry/Acrostic/February Copyright Protected, ID 08-698-413-08 All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France (My birthday - February 1) For the Premier contest, Birthday Month Acrostic Sponsor, Charlotte Puddifoot, Judged 2015 Third Place

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Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 2/17/2021 5:26:00 AM

Constance, I love February, because it is my birthday month too... I just loved this poem in beautiful acrostic... Last three lines just awesome. So, we both have something in common... Lol. This will be my fav again. Thanks for these amazing lines. Hugs ~ Ani

Constance La France
Date: 2/17/2021 7:38:00 AM

Ani, thanks for seeking out an older poem of mine and for the comment and compliment _Constance

Barbara Campbell

Date: 8/27/2015 6:14:00 PM

I love the way your winner poem evoked the feel of pleasant beauty; appreciated the colorful ending. Barbara

Jack Horne

Date: 8/19/2015 2:39:00 PM

oh, i love this - the only snow I'll experience this year, i expect : )

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/17/2015 11:09:00 PM

Congrats on another wonderful win with this awesome february acrostic my dear broken!

Skat A

Date: 8/17/2015 2:50:00 PM

Awesome win.... SKAT

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/16/2015 10:43:00 AM

wow, this is so beautiful. Can't believe I am only seeing it no. BIG congrats in the contest with this well deserved win.

Bill Lindsay

Date: 8/16/2015 4:16:00 AM

Adore the reference to the violin ... well done ;)

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 8/15/2015 8:55:00 PM

I liked the wind wails like violin part. Congrats.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/15/2015 7:19:00 PM

My Sweeties Birthday is February 1st as well. Cool! Congratulations Constance.

Thabang Ngoma

Date: 8/15/2015 5:10:00 PM

Hi Broken Wing...very interesting to learn that this time of the year when we're flocking to public pools and the beach - you're building the snowman and putting on skiis for fun in the snow..congrats on prolific win *******(:heers, Tbang

Faye Gibson

Date: 8/15/2015 4:23:00 PM

This one is stunning; i loved reading it. Congratulations!

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 8/15/2015 4:01:00 PM

you painted with your pen, constance, this was just like looking at a painting - a beautiful one - i loved how you brought in the brightness of the yellow to contrast with the wintry white in that last line - congrats on your win in my contest :)

Jan Allison

Date: 8/15/2015 3:59:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Broken Wings:-) hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/15/2015 3:36:00 PM

-so many beautiful lines, the wind wails like violins, snowflakes like delicate lace, such an awesome write, grats on your win!

Eric Boddie

Date: 8/14/2015 1:41:00 PM

the Beauty you describe....can only coincide....which I feel is your greatest source of pride....and that is your Beauty from inside.....;)

Kash Poet

Date: 8/13/2015 11:22:00 AM

Lovely Acrostic here!Enjoyed.

Dan Cwiak

Date: 8/11/2015 5:57:00 AM

Almost makes me wish I'd been born in February. Great lines! Thanks for the thoughts and your words. Kudos on this one!

Emile Pinet

Date: 8/10/2015 3:40:00 PM

Hell, I would have given you a seven just for being born in February, but your poem earned those marks on its own merit with good flow and great word choices that brought your thoughts across well. Emile. #7

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/9/2015 9:13:00 PM

What a beautiful, magical piece that sings in tune with a heavenly violin! Exquisite imagery that arises from your gifted pen, my friend! A 7 of course! Pandita

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/9/2015 5:21:00 AM

- One month with a beautiful lights and sparkling snowflakes - Beautiful written, B.W. - I wish you good luck in the contest - Have a nice Sunday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 8/9/2015 1:49:00 AM

beautiful imagery Broken wings - good luck in the contest:-) hugs janxx7

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/8/2015 8:55:00 PM

Beautifully composed. Good luck. Love, Joyce