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Feathers

heavenly angels warring against dark forces -- blackened feathers fall 7/12/15 for SKAT's Haiku Feathers contest

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 8/7/2015 10:43:00 AM

Love this haiku can see a picture of this in my mind. love phyl

Kim Merryman
Date: 8/11/2015 8:37:00 PM

Thank you, Phyl!

Robert Pettit

Date: 8/3/2015 7:12:00 PM

Reading this reminds me of seabirds getting caught in a crude oil spill on the ocean. It's a short write, but a good one.

Kim Merryman
Date: 8/11/2015 8:37:00 PM

Thank you, Robert!

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/1/2015 7:55:00 AM

I can see why this was rated highly in the contest,,love this Kim

Kim Merryman
Date: 8/1/2015 6:05:00 PM

Thank you, Harry!. Glad you liked it!

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 7/29/2015 5:57:00 PM

Your write swims smoothly in the heart of the readers, I like how you penned it and the imagery...............A.M.

Kim Merryman
Date: 8/1/2015 6:04:00 PM

Thank you, Afolabi! I appreciate your encouraging remarks!

Ralph Sergi

Date: 7/27/2015 7:20:00 AM

a BEAUTIFUL HAIKU, KIM.

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/27/2015 4:40:00 PM

Thank you, Ralph!

Constance La France

Date: 7/23/2015 11:10:00 AM

Kim, back to read this beauty again and I want to thank you so much for my wonderful placement in your independence contest, I am so honored

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/27/2015 4:38:00 PM

Thank you, Constance, and you are welcome!

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 7/23/2015 10:55:00 AM

An excellence piece here, you penned this great. Thanks for my placement in your contest, it is appreciated ............A.M.

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/27/2015 4:37:00 PM

Thank you, Afolabi, and you are welcome!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/19/2015 12:59:00 PM

impressive write, dear kim.. congrats on your win and thanks for inspiring me to write for your wave contest.. much appreciated and pleasantly surprised!.. huggs

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/20/2015 4:56:00 PM

Thank you, Nette, and you are most welcome!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/19/2015 8:30:00 AM

Good one..Enjoyed reading your work..Looking forward to the day when evil is defeated..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..I appreciate the place of honor..Thanks for stopping by to let me know that I placed and that you understood from where the inspiration came..Sara

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/20/2015 4:55:00 PM

Thank you, Sara, and you are most welcome!

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 7/18/2015 4:57:00 PM

What a wonderful and intrigue piece. excellent............A.M.

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/20/2015 4:54:00 PM

Thank you, Afolabi! I appreciate your comment.

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/17/2015 2:16:00 AM

An image of the great Armageddon, Kim. Love this! hugs

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/20/2015 4:51:00 PM

Thank you, Kim! Glad you like it.

Eve Roper

Date: 7/16/2015 5:35:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful win a 7. Hugs Eve

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/16/2015 7:39:00 PM

Thank you, Eve!

Constance La France

Date: 7/16/2015 1:33:00 PM

Kim, so beautifully penned 7, congratulations and thanks for visiting my poem, where bluebirds sing

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/16/2015 7:38:00 PM

Thank you and you are most welcome, Constance!

Jan Terry

Date: 7/16/2015 11:36:00 AM

Sounds like the heavenly angels are winning, as they should. Love the theme of good against evil. Congrats on your win, dear Kim. :) Janece

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/16/2015 7:36:00 PM

Thank you, Janece! I'm glad you like it.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/16/2015 10:47:00 AM

beautifully penned many congrats on your win Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/16/2015 7:35:00 PM

Thank you so much, Jan!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/16/2015 4:45:00 AM

Wow...Outstanding Kim! Congratulations on your wonderful win!

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/16/2015 7:34:00 PM

Thank you, Connie! I appreciate it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/15/2015 11:26:00 PM

ZOWIE!!that was inventive, kim!! I hope it scored high. I am not at the winners' list yet but I bet she really liked this one. Congrats.

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/16/2015 7:33:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea! You are always so encouraging!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/15/2015 11:16:00 PM

Kim, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/16/2015 7:32:00 PM

Thank you, Linda! I appreciate it.

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/15/2015 10:57:00 PM

Great apocalyptic imagery, Kim. Well done. Viv x

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/16/2015 7:31:00 PM

Thank you, Viv! Glad you liked it.

Skat A

Date: 7/15/2015 10:46:00 PM

Kim:) Congratulations on your awesome feather win. **SKAT**

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/16/2015 7:30:00 PM

Thank you for my placement, Skat!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/15/2015 11:28:00 AM

- A beautiful Haiku, dear Kim (7) - Good luck in contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/16/2015 7:29:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise! I appreciate it.

Constance La France

Date: 7/14/2015 1:49:00 PM

Kim, a beautiful 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, after ...

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/16/2015 7:28:00 PM

Thank you, Constance, for your encouraging words.

Laura Leiser

Date: 7/13/2015 11:20:00 AM

Great analogy of spiritual warfare in this poem, Kim! Well done :)

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/16/2015 7:27:00 PM

Thank you, Laura! That's what I was trying to portray.

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/13/2015 11:20:00 AM

This is so good Kim, positive and visual..good luck.

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/16/2015 7:25:00 PM

Thank you, Harry! I appreciate it!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/12/2015 6:17:00 PM

Nicely done for her contest!

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/16/2015 7:24:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea!