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Feathers

From the blue, blue sky a feather turns on the breeze Flightless memories Turning down the sheets I sink into feathered bed On downy swan clouds © Brenda V Northeast 23 Jan. 2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/23/2012 10:10:00 PM
sounds nice to me...AND much thanks for reading and commenting on my stuff!
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Brenda Victoria Northeast
Date: 1/23/2012 11:17:00 PM
Thank you so much, brenda : )
Date: 1/23/2012 8:18:00 PM
I taste serenity when I read this, Brenda! Beautiful Haikus! Thanks for the visit and kind comments. Love, Annalise
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Date: 1/23/2012 1:51:00 PM
Lovely haiku, my friend
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Date: 1/23/2012 12:39:00 PM
my grandma had a feathered bed. enjoyed reading your poem today, have a wonderful, blessed day, and thanks for commenting, I appreciate that. Cindy
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Date: 1/23/2012 8:28:00 AM
Loved reading your Haiku,s Brenda , thank you Declan xxx
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Date: 1/23/2012 5:28:00 AM
Very creative and expressive work..Enjoyed reading this morn..That down sheets must be very warm on a cold winter's night..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
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