Feathers

Birds huddle on perch Lamenting the lost summer... Fluffing their feathers

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Rhia Madison Thomer

Date: 10/15/2010 10:41:00 AM

i liked this one, an excellent write --Madison

Audrey Haick

Date: 9/24/2010 7:59:00 PM

Reminding us that summer's coming to an end, Francine..I enjoyed the imagery..Good job. Love, Audrey

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/24/2010 5:37:00 PM

This haiku sure brings to mind those fluffy feathers-- cute and sad in a way--enjoyed this one Francine :)-- nikko :)

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/24/2010 1:14:00 PM

very nice!! enjoyed reading today!

James Fraser

Date: 9/24/2010 8:29:00 AM

And there will be many a huddle Francine, lovely Haiku >> James

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/24/2010 7:59:00 AM

Beautiful haiku and I notice you stuck to the 5 7 5 form which is all to the good. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/24/2010 4:17:00 AM

I don't know how the small birds survive winters in the North, but somehow they seem to make it. Never saw a "frozen" bird when I lived in NJ. Very lovely haiku, Francine. Best wishes, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/24/2010 3:54:00 AM

Or perhaps welcoming the autumn, Francine

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/23/2010 10:20:00 PM

This sure paints a picture of those lost summer birds, Francine. Nice one!

Nate D.

Date: 9/23/2010 9:42:00 PM

hi there, Francine yes how that summer passed us by so quick. That would rattle one up. Time for the huddle of change, nathan